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The Perfect Dive 1/1

Apr 02, 2009 10:26

Title: The Perfect Dive
Author: astrum_presul
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Tony/Michelle, Sheppard/Weir, Beckett/Cadman
Word Count: 4,300
Prompt: fanfic100 #095. New Year.
Spoilers: Takes place in the series after Against the Tides. All stories can be found at lantean_manorSummary: It's a special day for two special people in Elizabeth and John's lives ( Read more... )

Comments 10

bookworm0503 April 2 2009, 14:54:27 UTC

Awwwwwwww. That's what I kept doing as I read it. I'm pretty sure the roommate thinks I'm slightly crazy. Your fault, you big jerk.

Weddings are hard to write...I know. Haha. But you did a lovely job with it. It was very sweet without being overly so and it still seemed very much in character. I especially loved Tony in it when he was pulling off the garter; it even made me a little squeamish...in a good way!. And the whole thing just makes me want to squish them :)

And um...I wouldn't say no to getting some of the honeymoon experience...y'know... just fyi. :P

astrum_presul April 2 2009, 15:45:56 UTC

Haha I'm pretty sure your roommate think's you're crazy anyway. ;)

They are, dude! I realized that I'd cheated and glossed over John and Elizabeth's wedding in this Universe. Thank you muchly!

Haha I'll keep that in mind.

yaboiksar April 2 2009, 14:59:47 UTC

**swoon**

So frakin' love this universe.

And I love that it's more from *you*.

astrum_presul April 2 2009, 15:53:45 UTC

Aww, yay!

I've been waiting to post this one for forever. It gives me the warm and fuzzies, no lie.

etamne April 2 2009, 15:03:19 UTC

There is so much about this one that I want to tell you is awesome!

1. A wedding? Fantastic. And being from Elizabeth's POV works out fabulously!
2. Ronan + Baby < Tony + Baby but STILL Ronan + Baby = completely freaking amazing.
3. Tony forgot the rings...Bwhahahaha!
4. The garter scene? Guh. So. Hot.
5. I love this one. You are awesome.

astrum_presul April 2 2009, 16:02:43 UTC

Thank you! :D

2. Yep. I agree with that wholeheartedly. :D
3. Tony was a little nervous. Goober.
4. *grin*
5. Thank you!

vickysg1 April 2 2009, 16:49:13 UTC

Awwwwww! This was an extra cute fic! And I so can see Ronon with Victoria! And I really feel sorry for any future boyfriend she might have with him, John and Tony there... :P

astrum_presul April 2 2009, 22:57:55 UTC

Thank you! I really feel sorry for Victoria's future boyfriends too!

ankareeda April 3 2009, 20:28:18 UTC

This is so perfect and just wonderful! Your fics make so happy. I just adore Victoria and her parents! And Ronon is just the best babysitter ever. :D *nods* Thank you!

astrum_presul April 5 2009, 03:09:37 UTC

Hee, thank you so much. I really really really needed just a little encouragement today.