Wanna try writing a story O///O

Oct 15, 2010 09:06


sooo as the title says im new at this and my english is not that good

fell free to critiques and coments !!!!


ch 1.1

When he open his dark gray eyes , the first thing he sees is green sheltering him from the sun's heat. which is something he finds odd. he is so used to be taller than everything else in what ever dimension he's in , but as fast as the curiosity arise he ignored it. he stretched his body , his arm and leg as far as he could , yawn without making any sound , and then lastly waiving his proud tail.

'wait , how come i cant feel my tail?,' not suspecting anything he turn his head searching his tail that suppose to be glued to his body ,but now he cant find anywhere plus his sexy and beautiful butt disappeared . change into some fluffy smooth skin "whadde hell?!," he scream in shock but his own voice gave him another heart attack "whaa?!," like an unending nightmare , he notice that not only his tail and voice ,his body ,his proud dragon body has change into something else. 
"whaa ?? where is my....,"  when he still trying to remember what happen , his instinct made him realize that someone is coming. he turn around to find another dragon with the same body as he is now, and their eyes meet.

" well hello,just when i thought you re gonna sleep another century and i decide to ditch you." arrogantly that crimson red colored dragon shrug at him while dragging some meat that smells good with him.
" you.," the gray eyed crawled while he glared " i know your smell....you are that sneaky little stalker who keep following me one dimension after another." the air stiff with his Mana flowing out pouring his wrath out.

( this is chapter 1.1 not finished yet but keep bugging me all day, so i need to dump it somewhere.. im gonna try better next time.)
((next chap im gonna at least find a decent title 4 it and the chara bio))

marluxia

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