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larabeckinsale

Dresden fic - yet untitled

Feb 14, 2011 14:02

Title: Untitled
Fandom: The Dresden Files (books)
Pairing: Harry/Murphy
Spoilers: Changes and Aftermath
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: It all belongs to Jim Butcher, I'm just playing around.

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harry/murphy

Comments 17

strikske February 14 2011, 18:15:37 UTC

This is another great chapter. I do hope you will write some more stories about Harry and Karrin. PLZ?!?!?

I noticed some spelling errors perhaps you could read it over some time, or maybe a beta-reader?

larabeckinsale February 14 2011, 18:21:56 UTC

Thanks for reading :) I'm working on some more.

I'll double check the spelling, I don't have a beta, nobody ofreced :(

larabeckinsale February 14 2011, 18:31:25 UTC

I mean offered, i'm writing from an iPad and It keeps messing with my spelling!

strikske February 14 2011, 18:44:18 UTC

If you like I would be happy to Beta read for you. That's something I can do as I don't write any fic myself. No talent what so ever *gg*

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debris4spike February 14 2011, 20:06:02 UTC

As ever - really enjoyable.

I've often wondered about a soul gaze between the 2 of them!

I'm glad she accepted him with all his "bad" things.

larabeckinsale February 14 2011, 21:14:39 UTC

I'm happe you've enjoyed it.

I wonder too. I didn't went into details with it here because there's this great mistery about what Harry is like inside. People who have soulgazed him seemed scared and maybe not necesarily because it's a bad thing that they see, I think it's maybe because they just don't understand.

I thoutht, Murph could probably feel that way too, considering the way she talks him about during Aftermath.

sarian71 February 15 2011, 07:15:10 UTC

I've always thought that if Harry and Murphy ever did the soulgaze, it would be a huge and profound moment. And that's what it was here! I really loved how you explored Karrin's conflicting emotions, and how friendship, loyalty and most importantly love prevailed in the end.

larabeckinsale February 15 2011, 17:15:46 UTC

Oh, it'll be huge! I agree, that's why Jim hasn't let it happen yet.
I'm glad that you got the sentiment of conflict that Murph was feeling, that's what I was going for with tis fic. Thanks for reading.

hyde_the_body March 31 2011, 07:09:03 UTC

Happy, heart-felt murmured mumblings of fluffy, tender, bittersweet LOVE were emitted. I may have worried the floormates a little.

larabeckinsale April 2 2011, 02:09:00 UTC

:D I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Sorry about the floormates ;D