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larainefan

Ringo Takes Charge---Chapter Eighteen

Oct 25, 2011 10:57

Title: Ringo Takes Charge---Chapter Eighteen (Ringo's POV)
Rating: NC17
Pairing: George/Ringo
Author: larainefan/Alicia Mills
Location/time: London flat, mid-1960s
Warnings: sex; unconsensual sex
Disclaimer: not the real Beatles, just characters loosely inspired by them
Author Note: i hope by now lj cuts are working. If not, I'll post to my ( Read more... )

george/ringo

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larainefan October 25 2011, 20:16:49 UTC

I aim to please, Ha!Ha! I'm glad you enjoyed this, Jena, thanks for reading!

I'm hoping to collect all my George/Ringo stories into a book, and see if I can publish them as I did Exploring George. Things move so slowly in the publishing world, it's good to have as many things out there as possible, to get one's name out. Are you still writing?

samberrie October 25 2011, 23:36:10 UTC

Ahh, why did I enjoy that so much? George + rape shouldn't be enjoyable, but I'd be lying to say this wasn't great. It's just how you wrote it so eloquently and I didn't feel uncomfortable reading it or anything. Exactly what a write is supposed to do.

I feel so conflicted though. I'm not sure whether to feel somewhat happy for Ringo, lol obviously the wrong choice, but.. I mean.. he just wants George! Who can blame him for going so far after holding back so long?

But then again I'm like noo! Bad Ringo! We do not rape guitarists, no matter how gorgeous they are! Geez, must you make me feel so in-between emotions? lol.

Only two more chapters? But.. but.. you're my only epic-G/R-fix right now, I need you! Alas, I'm sure they'll be great though, so I will eagerly await them.

larainefan October 26 2011, 18:05:44 UTC

Let's hope George enjoyed that, so that it was really more of a seduction! Although, if Ringo hadn't been drunk, maybe he would have managed things with a little more finesse (and maybe gotten nowhere in the process?) I did want to convey what might be going through Ringo's mind to go to such lengths.

Thank you for the nice feedback! I have a few ideas once this is finished. You make sure you continue sharing your Beatles writings, too, okay? I love the current story you have going.

pageysflower October 26 2011, 16:41:04 UTC

Oh my good God... I almost didn´t breathe. I have never seen Ringo in such state of mind, it was so rough, but - and I also feel a bit guilty- it was so arousing. I only hope Georgie enjoyed it a bit too- oh, I can´t wait for the other two chapters to see, how it will end. I must say, that I´m a very bad slasher in the last time, being somewhere else all the time :) . But this story really got me and I´m hooked since the first chapter.
And how are you doing? I´m quite fine. I saw the George documentary ( on the net, because we don´t have HBO and in Europe they didn´t broadcast it. It made me love George even more. He was such a unique, wonderful being.

larainefan October 26 2011, 18:09:21 UTC

I'm glad you're continuing with this, you've been so patient, about as patient as Ringo throughout this story. I am determined to finish it, the next 2 chapters should not take long, I already have the notes for George's POV. I miss you here, I hope you're happy where you're spending time, tumblr, I guess? It would be nice if things picked up here too, I miss your wonderful stories.

I hope things are well for you. I saw the documentary, Madorad very kindly provided the links, otherwise I would not have been able to. It also made me have even more appreciation for George than ever, (if that's possible). He was a very unique person. I loved Olivia in the film too.

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larainefan October 26 2011, 19:44:41 UTC

The next two final chapters will reveal how George is, and his state of mind! Thanks so much for reading! :)

sherrygabs October 27 2011, 08:19:25 UTC

Wow! Geesh, poor George. Dang good writing. Trouble is, I've only found chapters 17 and 18. Where can I find the first 16 chapters? I'd love to read those.

larainefan October 27 2011, 12:35:40 UTC

Thanks for reading! The rest can be found in my Memories, but here's a link:

http://www.livejournal.com/tools/memories.bml?user=larainefan&keyword=Ringo%20Takes%20Charge&filter=all

Hope that helps. I appreciate the feedback! Thanks again!

sherrygabs October 28 2011, 06:58:08 UTC

Thanks for sending the link to the first 16 chapters. Now Chs 17 and 18 have much more meaning.
Trying to view from both their points, I can see where George would be reluctant to consummate completely; but Ringo has to be so frustrated after waiting so long and hearing George wants to go off and see John for whatever reason.
You're writing this so well, describing actions and emotions beautifully, making us readers feel like the fly on the wall, so to speak. Very easy to see and understand everything.
Can't wait for the next chapter to see the fallout from all this.

larainefan October 28 2011, 15:19:08 UTC

Thank you so much, that means a lot to me! Very nice feedback! I didn't want to write Ringo one-dimensionally bad or anything, I wanted to get into his character's mind a little. Of course, who can resist George! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed the previous parts, thanks for going back and reading. I'll work on the next over the weekend, hope to have it up soon!