The next portion is here....

[lark01]

Hopefully, there will be something here for anyone that reads it....comments, as always are welcome...even if you just comment to let me know that you read it....thanks

Comments

[chang_lee_ninja]

wow cool :)

told u.......

[boredmama]

I knew it would continue to be great...your details are incredible, rally makes one slide into the mind of the character. I definately need to get some help with my writing....again looking forward to the next phase...(waaaaaaaay curious now ;) ) aaaaaaaand now im back to data...thanks for the break ;)

Re: told u.......

[just_an_asshole]

that was good

i dont know you at all
sorry... i just started clicking things and got here

Re: told u.......

[lark01]

Thanks for the vote of confidence. Tell your friends to come read and comment on it if you want to. The more folks that read it, the more constructive criticism I get. Hell, I am a big boy I can handle it...
Thanks again
pel

Re: typo :)

[lark01]

huh?