A Song for Swans

[larouille]

Title: A Song for Swans
Fandom: Pandora Hearts
Pairing: Vincent/Leo
Rating: T
Words: 1340
Summary: He will hold this boy until black bleeds out to grey.

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.a song for swans+

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[rip the earth in two with your mind

seal the urge which ensues with brass wires

i never meant you any harm

your tears feel warm as they fall on my forearm]

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And,

Comments

[kannuki_neru]

Oh
I'm so crap at conveying my thoughts but I'll try. So, of course you DID write it xD And I'd say this might very well be what was going through Vincent's mind during that scene.
Your writing style is quite unique, it flows very well but it's not easyto read, as in - it's demanding but rewarding.I like it a lot.
I must admit the first time I read it I was a bit doubtful - was Vincent really thatshaken by Leo? But then I re-read the chapter again and you got it spot on - he really was. He makes all kinds of expressions I've never seen him make before and holy shit, this is amazing! HOW AMAZING IS THAT.
..I feel I'm not making much sense now, I only planned to comment with "It's great" or something D:

[larouille]

Fufufufufu, thank you so much! Yeah, I was sort of kicking myself the whole time while I writing this because I felt like a lot of the descriptions were mostly my own thoughts towards TEH SEXINESS THAT IS LEO, but looking back on the chapter, I feel better about it. Vincent's expressions in that scene were so unlike him, so I really think Leo might have made a serious mark on him. I really hope so, I frickin' love this pairing now. >.<

[kannuki_neru]

BECAUSE LEO IS PURE SEXINESS ♥
And yeah, Leo must have done something to him and it's going to be so interesting to watch! Btw I've just thought about it and can you imagine Gilbert's and everyone's reaction to suddenly seeing Vincent all over the-suddenly-stunning Leo? MINDFUCK ♥

[larouille]

Oh my god, yes! I keep getting this weird chain of thoughts that involves Gil becoming the new Duke Nightray, and somehow having Leo become his servant (not sure why Gil would ever need one, but maybe some sort of ducal obligation or something?), which would mean extra craziness in terms of how Leo's teamed up with Vincent and yet be serving Vincent's own brother. O_O
That would never happen, of course, but it's kind of a cool thought. xD

[galigaligaliko]

Oh, my babies. Have them, please do.

[larouille]

Can they look like Leo? Pretty please? xD
Thank you so much for reading. <3

[galigaligaliko]

Ideally, yes!

So glad to see you writing this pairing as well :) And so very beautifully!

[ragingbird]

Beautifully written! This new glimpse into Vincent's motivations and psyche have been so eye opening to the character, so reading things like this really does give me a whole new love of the guy. Thank you for sharing it.

[larouille]

Thank you so much, love! Eeee, this chapter is just so pivotal to Vincent's character, and it makes me so giddy to hear that people are opening up to him more now that his motivations have been exposed. I really think there are a lot of things in store for both Vincent and Leo in the near future...

[gommyommy]

I was gonna quote my favorite parts but then realized I'd be quoting, like, half of it. I especially like your descriptions of crying :) And Leo's "avian" body...holy carp you GOT IT. The Glen-bird metaphor + skin and bones and delicacy and ALL THAT, summed up in one word.

[larouille]

Fwaaaaar, I always love your comments. :DDD
Thank you so much, dearie. I have to find some excuse to use that word in almost everything I write, it's just so pretty. xD

[saphirablossom]

Oh. Oh... O.O

This. Is. Mind-blowing. Seriously. I think you've just upped my current fascination for Vincent/Leo up a notch. A big notch, might I add!
I just love your writing style, it's so introspective and descriptive and it just flows naturally and it sucks you in.

I think I love you for this... <3

[larouille]

EEEEE! That is one hell of a lovely review! <333
Thank you so much for your kind words, they really mean a lot to me. I was so worried that this fic was too melodramatic to be enjoyable, so I'm glad I've been proved otherwise. :333