truth is - [no. 6 fanfic]

[larouille]

Title: Truth IsFandom: No. 6
Characters: Nezumi, Shion
Words: 3,244
Prompt: 8. books
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.truth is

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there are angels in your angles
there’s a low moon caught in your tangles

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            Shion is a vision in white sheets and lamplight, lit up in an amber kerosene glow, and he looks young. It’s a redundant observation to make at this point, Nezumi dryly

Comments

[extraordinary]

Unf~! ♥

This was wonderful... Every time I scrolled down to reveal more text I was hoping I wouldn't reach the end yet. It was so good I didn't want it to be over. *bites lip!*

[larouille]

Oh my gosh, that is suuuch a huge compliment! I've read fics like that where I'm like "oh god, please don't let it end" so to hear that mine was one of them is just awesome. Thank you so much! <3

[extraordinary]

Haha! I'm glad my incoherent comment made you happy! ;)

I wish I was better at expressing myself when it comes to leaving comments on fics... your writing is excellent so I just want to be able to leave a more useful comment than just flaily fangirliness! *laughs!*

I didn't even particularly feel like reading fanfic when you posted but I had the tab open and nothing else to do at the time so I figured I'd skim it quickly - but then your Nezumi totally pulled me in and I completely forgot about everything around me, haha. I was literally holding my breath when Nezumi's hand wandered to Shion's lips and hoping that Nezumi'd just lean in and replace his hand with his lips. FKDLJFDKJFDKF. :'D

[larouille]

Hahaha, I totally know what you mean about the whole wanting Nezumi to kiss him thing...I had to make a conscious effort not to turn this into a really long lemon simply because I wanted to keep up that air of tension between them even if my inner Nezushi fanatic was like "KISS HIM ALREADY, GOD". xDD
That being said...I think the next thing I'll have to write for these two will be something more adult, so that should be, erm, interesting. ^^;

[oximore]

This is gorgeous.

[larouille]

Eeee, thank you so much! I'm glad you think so. <3

[ulti_matecircus]

Too great for words !

I liked it so much I read it again 2 times ! Nezumi's pov is so rare in fanfic ... and kinda difficult to portray imo. You did a really good job with him (and Shion too..), they seem totally in character and it's so much beautifully written... <3

please write more ? ^_^

[larouille]

Wow, you read it three times altogether? That's amazing, oh my goodness. I'm blushing. <333
I've had quite a few people tell me that it's rare to find Nezumi POV fiction, so I'm glad I could contribute a bit to that; I'm actually really surprised that not a lot of people write in his POV, since I feel like he has a really interesting mindset on a lot of things like the world around him and Shion and whatnot.
I'll definitely keep writing for this fandom! I'm so in love with it right now, and all of the fans seem so good-natured. Thanks again! <3

[roweena5000]

I -love- this. Once again you've taken me into Nezumi's mind in the most amazing way. I love how you write him, it's spot on, completely in character and so wonderful. You display his emotions and, for lack of a better word, inner turmoil as to what having Shion in his life is doing to him. It must be scary for Nezumi who's always been alone and depended on nobody but himself to have this kind of experience, and you express it so well.

Also, the way you write make me feel as if I were there, not just reading about it. It draws me in to the point where I feel as if I could reach out my hand and touch what I'm reading. Thank you.