.this is my rifle - [pandora hearts]

Sep 30, 2011 23:38

Title: This Is My Rifle
Fandom: Pandora Hearts
Characters: Gilbert, Break
Rating: T
Words: 983

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prompt: 12. under your skin

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.this is my rifle

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feel me in the aftermath
when you learn the world has teeth

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The girl that Gilbert shoots in the mouth has blonde hair that almost glows silver in the sunlight. Her dress is blue, faded at the ( Read more... )

pandora hearts, fanfic

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larouille October 6 2011, 03:15:26 UTC
Hiya! Thanks so much for the review. <3 And yes, my writing tumblr is exitludes.tumblr.com in case you're ever interested~

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selvanic October 4 2011, 03:16:27 UTC
And we're here again, aren't we? I'm back to gush, to rant, to just adore. Admittedly, I just fell down the stairs five minutes ago (I tripped over a cat...), so it may not be as...intelligible as I'd like, but I have to do it.

Once again, you've given us something fantastic. You've given us something brilliant and terrifying and humanizing and grounding. You've given us a piece that draws us into poor Gilbert's tormented mind and his desperation to cling to something because of his own weakness. And you do it all so wonderfully; you make it so real. You side-step the all too easy trap of whining angst and give us something tangible, something that leaves a chill on the skin and a knot in the stomach.

Admittedly, this kind of broken, twisted, dependence is why I 'ship Gilbert and Break. That violence, that frustration, and that need for one another...They hate it, but they need it. And Gilbert's desperation for Oz, the fact that his master not being there is all that's keeping him going, is such a central, wonderful, painful, ( ... )

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larouille October 6 2011, 03:17:01 UTC
Oh god, another Gil/Break shiperrrrr~ Yes yes yes. I love these two so much, their dynamic is my absolute favorite to write for. I feel like they compliment each other so well, and in the most dark sense possible as well; I seriously think I could write these two all day every day and discover something new about their relationship every time.
Thank you so much as always, love~ <3

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