.two days from now - [death note]

[larouille]

Title: Two Days From Now
Fandom: Death Note
Characters: Matt, Mello
Rating: K+
Words: 945

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prompt: 329. two days from now
soundtrack: my sundown - jimmy eat world

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.two days from now

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i see it around me
i see it in everything
i could be so much more than this

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In the passenger’s seat, Mello sits crumpled up in cargo pants and one of Matt’s

Comments

[rebukes]

The descriptions in this were absolutely beautiful. You painted a nice picture without making it too purple, which is a pretty hard thing to do. People tend to either skimp or go overboard, but you had a nice balance.

Mello’s the only person in the world that could look sleepy enough to crash for a hundred years straight but capable of tearing down a city with his teeth beforehand. He’s brilliant and blazing with all the hard, ragged lines of him, and yet there’s a softness, an inverted grace about him that Matt has always found sort of, well, cool.

That stood out to me the most. It showed the stark contrast that is hard to capture in a single person, yet Mello pulls it off flawlessly. Conflict and balance, I guess.

Rambling. Anyway, nice piece. &hearts

[ext_1165278]

That was just wonderful. I love your tone of writing. The physical and emotional descriptions. I can paint a picture with that level of clarity. It's beautiful and absolutely amazing.