.tethers - [pandora hearts]

[larouille]

Title: Tethers
Fandom: Pandora Hearts
Characters: Gilbert, Oz, Alice
Rating: T
Words: 981

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prompt: 372. mint and lilac
soundtrack: threnody - goldmund

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.tethers

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so bye bye bye, oh bye bye
to all this dog-eared innocence
i can't pretend that i can tell you
what is going to happen next
or how to be
but you have no idea about me, do you?

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Oz passes

Comments

[selvanic]

Again...I find myself absolutely awe-struck and confused as to what I could possibly say, what I could do, to convey to you how powerful this piece is. And to think that it's just one of many parts...It's brilliant.

This form of narration is so rarely done -- or so rarely done well-- that to see how you've managed to do as much...It's brilliant. It's fascinating. It's captivating. You've managed to write in such a way that it's still Gilbert, it's still his pain, his ache, his loss, but it's felt more strongly. It's felt more personally. And it's...tangible. Real.