Comments | lars_carp: (без темы)

lars_carp

(Untitled)

Jan 11, 2010 19:05

Title: I Won't See You Tonight
Author: lars_carp
Pairing: John Terry/Frank Lampard
Summary: That was the first sign, and Frank didn't see it. He refused to see it.
Rating: R
Warnings: Death fic.
Word count: 1,375

( Here )

fic, john terry/frank lampard

Comments 17

butbyskylight January 11 2010, 21:28:23 UTC

I think my heart just shattered.
That was both beautiful and horrific at the same time.

lars_carp January 11 2010, 22:24:43 UTC

thanks for reading.

inesdelsol January 11 2010, 21:37:54 UTC

it's beautiful but please put the warning at the top. I don't want to read such things... :(

lars_carp January 11 2010, 22:26:05 UTC

thanks. and it's already got a warning.

inesdelsol January 11 2010, 22:33:13 UTC

"some angst" is not a warning, "some angst" means you got some depressed person in it, "death fic" would be more suitable, don't you think?... please do it [and please add the rating] , really. At least two more people read it and were shocked... We play with their sexuality, let's don't play with their lives... thanks

lars_carp January 11 2010, 23:43:36 UTC

alright thanks, I've changed all that. anything else you want me to change? the ending, maybe? so it's not so sad.

Thread 5

trainmad January 12 2010, 13:39:32 UTC

This is beautiful, and yet so sad at the same time. I like how you describe Frank's emotions after John's funeral, and the conversations that they don't actually have.

lars_carp January 14 2010, 20:09:09 UTC

thanks!

txorakeriak January 12 2010, 19:47:09 UTC

Beautiful fic, but SO SAD! You don't know what you've got till it's gone, and then it comes back at you with a vengeance. *sniffle* Poor them. :/ Well, at least in the end Frank realises that after all he did love John - too late, yes, but better than never.

Love your writing.

By the way, would you mind me archiving your stories here? :)

lars_carp January 14 2010, 20:09:52 UTC

thanks!

not at all, go ahead.

txorakeriak January 14 2010, 20:14:26 UTC

Thanks! All you have to do is register, I'll do the rest. :)

lars_carp January 14 2010, 20:41:22 UTC

alright, man. I just registered.

Thread 5

nanousblues January 14 2010, 19:08:06 UTC

Oh God... It's really well written... Too well written. Now i'm crying alone on my sofa... Yet I hate this. (crying not your fic).. I knew it was a death fic but I didn't realize it could touch me like that... Hope you'll write something happier next time ;-)

lars_carp January 14 2010, 20:10:31 UTC

hehe, I'll try to make a happier one. thanks!