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larsfarm77

Fanfic: Debriefing Part 1

Dec 01, 2008 14:31

Title: Debriefing ( Read more... )

roslin, fanfic, adama

Comments 48

obsessive_a101 December 1 2008, 20:12:07 UTC

*melts into a puddle of goo*

larsfarm77 December 2 2008, 03:45:53 UTC

Awww ... glad you enjoyed. More very soon :D.

zinke December 1 2008, 21:19:40 UTC

Yay! New fic! This is wonderfully written - your exploration of Laura's struggle with the intimacy of their situation (It was an intimacy that intrigued and frightened her at the same time... She just didn’t do this. She just didn’t do this.) is absolutely wonderful.

I can't wait to read the next installment.

larsfarm77 December 2 2008, 03:49:09 UTC

Thank you! I had fun looking at the domesticity from Laura's POV. I can see Bill being completely comfortable, but Laura just hasn't had the experience. It's awkward, and exciting and I think she feels scared by and drawn to it all at once. I'm so happy you enjoyed this aspect.

Thanks so much for commenting -- more very soon!

altitudeandwine December 1 2008, 21:24:56 UTC

Promising!
Love the details and the flahbacks

larsfarm77 December 2 2008, 03:51:29 UTC

The small details are some of the things I enjoy most in a fic. Hopefully this story will live up to the promise of this chapter. Appreciate the comments very much.

That's a beautiful icon!

somadanne December 1 2008, 21:43:00 UTC

Very nice and I can really see it happening. Can't wait for more. When will that be? (((Larsi)))

larsfarm77 December 2 2008, 03:53:26 UTC

((((Anne)))), that's such a wonderful compliment that you can picture this happening -- means a lot. More will be coming very soon (tomorrow) :)

How is the fic coming? ;)

somadanne December 2 2008, 08:11:12 UTC

It's actually coming along. :o I've got some new bits and pieces and a framework I might actually get to work. I can't believe I might do this. Keep on my case and it might actually happen.

I'm looking forward to your next installment tomorrow. :)

larsfarm77 December 2 2008, 14:08:04 UTC

WOOT!! If I could figure out how to put my dancing wookie gif in here I would. Keep on your case?? Yes, Ma'am, whatever you say, Ma'am :D.

alexis_davis02 December 1 2008, 22:35:31 UTC

Because it makes me squee like a little kid to see a new story from you, I had to leave you feedback love here and at SI.

Anything that comes from your mind with the aid of tjonesy is bound to be made of awesome -- this will be no exception.

larsfarm77 December 2 2008, 03:54:51 UTC

I love squee -- thank you so much for the love on both sites -- made my day!

As I said on SI, I hope that the fic lives up to expectation. More tomorrow :).