the sorrow that i've earned, part 3, harry/louis

Sep 23, 2012 18:43

Title: The Sorrow That I've Earned (part 3)
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Rating: R
Words: 3,845
Disclaimer: This is totally fictional, and I do not own One Direction or anyone associated with them (sadly).
Notes: So, I was supposed to help write an ending to this gorgeous, heartbreaking fic by Read more... )

harry/louis, fic

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laurenkd89 September 26 2012, 01:58:26 UTC
I LOVE YOU AND EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS.

Their whole sitting on the couch and just fitting together like two fucking puzzle pieces and then Louis' sexiness and Harry's desperateness and swoon all of it exceedingly hot and just overall...pretty? Like the way you've painted them is so gorgeous I just want to wrap myself up in their isolated happiness and never let go.

And Niall being such an angel with his texts aagh "Love u both xx" I don't know why that's so cute to me but it is.

Louis being all insecure and touchy and clingy sigh I want that always.

OH yes and so does Louis and this whole part is just lovely: “Want to wake up like this always,” Louis mumbles with a sigh. You’re caught off guard for all of 5 seconds, but then of course he said exactly what you were just thinking. It comes with the territory when you’re in love with your best friend. Your soulmate.

<3 <3 <3

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las109 September 26 2012, 02:39:47 UTC
I LOVE YOU

I'm so happy you liked how this ended because, as I've explained before, I can't not have a happy ending but they NEEDED TO TALK ABOUT IT FOR GOODNESS SAKE and they did but then they had to have a mini-food fight and also apparently digress/give in to their teenage hormones which, to be fair, is understandable bc they're young and in love and both so freaking attractive. So yeah the whole "ending" just took on a life of its own but I like it and I'm THRILLED that you enjoyed it because it's for your fic and for you and I only care what you think sooooooooooooo yeah :DDDDD

And omg Niall. My precious. He makes me so happy and I BET he sends texts like that all the time.

Ugh I loveeeeee needy!clingy!Louis. Because he is, he just is usually better at hiding it in public. And of course the ultimate thing is just them being best friends and soulmates and having the same thoughts and sharing the same brain.

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laurenkd89 September 26 2012, 03:54:40 UTC
yes yes absolutely, they /needed to talk about it and be grownups even though they're not. I really do hope niall sends texts like that because he's so precious and sweet :) HARRY AND LOUIS ARE FOREVER BEST FRIENDS/SOULMATES and that's the #1 reason I love them. but you know that.

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