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[lasselenta]

Title: The Lightning Storm
Fandom/Claim: Lost/Daniel Faraday
Rating: PG
Prompt: 3. Equilibrium
Summary: When it rains, he can almost remember what he has lost

Comments

[lorilann]

Poor, poor confused Daniel. It felt like I was missing something too with Daniel having just pieces of things or just being on the verge.

[lady_boromir]

This was so good! I liked how you wrote it from inside of Daniel's head, I could totally empathize with him! So sad that he can't remember Charlotte! But I loved how you used the Queen of Diamonds as a sort of euphemism for her. :)

[danlotteshipper]

Aw, this was wonderful. It's so sad, this Charlotte-less Daniel. =( I love how something as simple as rain can trigger memories of the island and everything. I realy liked the comparison of rain to Charlotte's eyes, and how he remembers Charlotte the most fondly... goodness, I read it again, and this is so great. Anyway, lovely fic. And your first, too, eh? =D Can't wait for more from you.

[zelda_zee]

This was a great peek inside Daniel's head. I love his identification of Charlotte with the Queen of Diamonds. That is just so perfect!