'Underword' Fanfiction - "The Unknown Chapter" (01/?)

[last_archangel]

Chapter Title: Territory
Fanfiction: The Unknown Chapter
Fandom: Underworld
Characters: Selene, Michael
Rating: M for sexuality and violence.
Words: 6,866
Summary: A chronicle of the nine-year period between Evolution and Awakening.
Spoilers: Will include spoilers for ALL the film canon, including Endless War.
A/N: I said I was back. I stayed up all last

Comments

[darkfrog24]

Unknown Chapter, part II: Return of the Harried Tree

I like the new figuring out the word for it section. It's much less perfunctory than the original, and it works. The word "mate" gets thrown around a lot in most of my fandoms and it's good to see a character hesitate before using it.

There is some contrast between the old sections and the markedly more graceful newer sections.

Typo: "wounds, fatel wounds."

In related news, I found my #$@% Starbucks gift card.

[last_archangel]

I fixed the whole sentence that typo was attached to, because it was an awkward one.

Trying not to laugh because of the card.

[darkfrog24]

No, please do laugh. I would, and you can bet that little $@%cking plastic bitch is.