Hello! I come with a bit of a Last Battle AU. It's not TSG-verse, but Ruth said it was okay to post other things here.
I started this for the Narnia Fic Exchange, based on this prompt:
I would adore a The Last Battle AU in which there is NOT a train accident. Jill and Eustace get to Narnia anyhow, they and Tirian save the country without Aslan
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Almost everybody living, actually. :D
The middle part is where I had the problems - I wanted to give all the characters a POV as they aged and lived in the world, but it ended up being thousands of words of navel-gazing and Their Very Serious Thoughts on Susan. I don't know if there's much salvageable in there, to be honest. And I think it needs rewriting from one POV. Maybe Lucy's. Hmm.
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