Writing agian..finally...

[latinsbaby93]

I've finally taken writting up again (thank the good god!) but i don't know if they make sense... read these, if you please, and tell me good or no.
I take either opinion... i don't get offended and i need to know how to improve my writing.

This one's called Habitual

Habits are an intriguing thing. They’re

Comments

[nohappy_endings]

Glad your writing again. Liked them both, but if I had to choose between the two....the second one. I loved the flow of that one, and it feels true. (Gee, wasting your life watching watching tv, I don't know anyone who does that::hangs head in shame::)
<3VJ

joey thepillows

[anonymous]

im not getting sick but i am getting more depressed.
anyways i love these. the first reminds me of a serman from a preacher because if you tell it like a speach it will tell itself.
the second i like because it hits close to home. i need the internet even when it bores me, like the tv because my friends always abandon me and those will always be there. oh well, i need to figure out my "life." i love you rachel!

[im_a_baby_bird]

hey rach..its robyn, ur favorite cousin in the whole wide world! :) anyways,i didnt know u had a LJ...wanna get together over april vaca? cell me then! LOVE U!

[latinsbaby93]

HEY ROBY
i haven't heard from you in forever!!!!
yes i want to get together... ummmm i have vacation this week (you're next week aren't you?!?!) annnnnd i don't know hwere im at next weekend...shiiiit
but call my cellular device! i think you have it if not its 603-318-6726...and now that everyone can get it! lol
<3 you sooo much
Rachel :D:P:D:P:D