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lattelady6

To Sleep, Perchance To Dream - Ch 9 - The Undiscovered Country - Pt. II

Nov 03, 2010 10:43

Disclaimer: See Prologue
Rating PG13
Pairing: Dom Cobb and Ariadne Bishop
Beta : Huge thanks to Vashti. Any remaining errors are mine, she did a great job.
Note: : Long chapter but there wasn’t a good break. This is Dom and Ariadne’s conversation about their dreams. Also you will see that Arthur has gained a last name, Allan. No real reason ( Read more... )

d/a, inception, to sleep

Comments 3

moonlight1314 November 10 2010, 00:30:33 UTC

<3 <3 <3 That is all I can say for this. I love how its Ariadne doing the backing of for once! Its refreshing. I can honestly say I completely enjoy the angle you've taken with this story and I can't wait to see which degree it goes off at. Please, PLEASE keep up the excellent work. I'll be sure to go back and comment on every chapter (more fully) on FF! :D

lattelady6 November 10 2010, 02:38:15 UTC

Thank you so much for your careful attention and comments on each chapter. It means a lot.

This chapter was fun to write but my characters kept going off on tangents instead of sticking to the matter at hand. All the ideas with The Undiscovered Country as part of the title were supposed to be in one chapter. As it turned out it would have been massive, so I broke it up.

I'm well into the next section and it should go off to my beta in the next few days. I'm typing with a cast on my hand and arm (right, of course) and it slows down the process. At times I just have to stop due to discomfort.

moonlight1314 November 10 2010, 15:01:44 UTC

You're very welcome! The occasional tangent can be fun. ;P And yay! More fic! But really, thanks a bundle for this great read, even more so for writing with an impediment. It shows the dedication you have to the story and honestly we need more writers like that. Just don't stress out the arm too much! That'd be horrid to do.