To Sleep, Perchance To Dream - Ch 11 - The Undiscovered Country Part IV

[lattelady6]

Disclaimer: See Prologue
Rating PG13+ but only for one tiny place.
Pairing: Dom Cobb and Ariadne Bishop
Beta : Huge thanks to Vashti. Any remaining errors are mine, she did a great job.
Previous Chapters: Prologue - To Be Or Not To Be - Ch 1 - Slings and Arrows Of Outrageous Fortune ; Ch 2 - Whether 'tis Nobler In The Mind To Suffer ; Ch 3 -

Comments

[moonlight1314]

Oh goodie! :D A new chapter. I'm doing the review by breaks (each new paragraph/ sentences from me is a ---- in your story)

The first bit was painful to read. It made me feel so frustrated for both Dom and Ariadne! I really loved the whole bit around this line though: "But you're the man who taught me that they didn't exist." There was a hint of desperation in her voice that she couldn't hide." And I could really envision the last line of that section (with Dom rolling on the bed)! It made me grin a bit to be able to see it so clearly.

I wish Miles would take ME out for hot chocolate and croissants! *mumbles*Lucky kids*mumbles* >,< :P But the whole talk with Sabin- I mean Mme. Benoit-Elkins was excellent, very well written and it made me think (always something good to do while reading). I was very taken with the line "Humans need challenges to survive." I find it rings very true. I hope you don't mind if I use that when talking to some people (I will credit if you like)?

This line: “I told you I’d give you all the space you needed

[lattelady6]

I'm glad you liked this chapter. I've got one more chapter posted on ff.net than I do here. I had hand surgery on my left hand in October and my right hand was done just before Christmas. The cut and paste necessary for LJ is difficult until the cast comes off in a week.

I had fun writing that section with Sabine. I laughed at parts of it and hope others did too. Feel free to use the quote "humans need challenges to survive". It's not original. I heard it in one form or another in psych classes, A&P, and nursing classes.

In that chapter I've got on fanfic.net, Dom is a bit less of a gentleman. The one I'm trying to type, with one weak hand and one in a cast, is Ariadne confronting her problems in a shared dream. things will move along a bit faster once this darn cast comes off.

[moonlight1314]

Oh. Really? Then I shall rush off to read at FF.net :D I don't think I'll comment though. I can't do it on my cellphone. >,< I'll comment when you post it here though. And I had a feeling that quote wasn't original, but I think you put it so simply, that I had to comment on it. Well I wish you luck with the cast. I've never had one and the surgery I'm going for in March doesn't need one (though I asure you it will be mighty uncofortable), so I won't know how it feels, but I'm guessing it will be a great relief of stress.