[Fanfiction] - Kaname/Zero - Catharsis

Dec 24, 2008 23:30

Title: Catharsis (Part 5/5)
Fandom: Vampire Knight
Beta: kashibanohikari
Characters/Pairing: KanamexZero, ZeroxKaname
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Yaoi (duh XD), biting, violence, implied sex, BDSM themes.
Disclaimer: If VK belonged to me, there would be a lot more of this. *points to fic*
Summary: Catharsis: n. from Greek katharsis, from kathairein, to purge, from ( Read more... )

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manaie December 24 2008, 15:12:35 UTC
FOUND IT!!!

that's a really awesome christmas present. ♥ Really. You have no idea.

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manaie December 24 2008, 15:16:00 UTC
Oh, oh, and to be honest, I probably would've ended it at They tumbled together, and as they came apart in each others arms, for a few moments they forgot who they were, and became everything they wanted to be. But as beautiful as that line is, it's not their relationship over all so it probably needed that end bit.

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gypsy_girl090 December 24 2008, 22:05:20 UTC
I really wanted to end it there, because I liked that line (and that entire chapter had been full of fail, so that was a big thing at the time), but it just didn't feel...right to me. As you said, it's just not their relationship.

Also, I had a very vivid mental image of Kaname sitting there, leaning against the couch and just watching Zero sleep, perfectly still but crying. I don't know. It was very late early by the time I finished.

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manaie December 30 2008, 08:42:57 UTC
It really isn't. Even moi, who still can't watch it, knows that. XD

.... it's a very good mental image. And very much more IC I think. Ehehe. But the best things are written early in the morning. Something about the mind by then I think.

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kazura_uyurin December 24 2008, 15:42:07 UTC
Awww... more smut would've been better, but well, I'll just put my imagination to good use~ ^.^

The ending's kind of bittersweet, but in general, that's how the whole feel of this fic to me. Great job as always. Kinda sad to see that this is the end, but hopefully, you'll write more, ne? :)

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gypsy_girl090 December 24 2008, 22:08:33 UTC
I know, I'm a tease. I promised, I promised and I...wrote one of those nasty 'oh look, ambiguous hot smex is being had at this moment' sentences. :p I'm evol.

I wanted to finish with sap, but it just didn't work out in my mind. It would have felt out of character if I'd given them a 'and then they curled up in each other's arms' type ending. Besides, I like a bit of Kaname torture in my fics. XD

I suspect more is on its way. Probably not a sequel to this, because I might have to, horror of horrors, intr0duce actual plot if I did that, but VK is too delightful a fandom for me not to write more.

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kazura_uyurin December 26 2008, 14:49:07 UTC
Haha. S'ok. For me at least, can't speak for anyone else. Lol. XD"

Ah Kaname torture... seems like everyone likes it! XD But he just asks for it... it great big amounts too. ^^"

Any fic is good for me! VK is too delightful a fandom yes! Now I just wish I could get some inspiration to write a Kaname/Zero fic... considering they're my OTP... It's strange cause I've already written fics for VK but nothing seems to strike me for my OTP. D:

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zahho_mii February 5 2009, 11:27:22 UTC
I'm seriously smacking myself over and over for not finding your fic earlier. *A* Your style of writing and vocabulary are amazing. In fact, amazing doesn't even describe it. Do write more Z/K fics in the future or I'll cry! 8D Your Kaname is one of the best I've seen.

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gypsy_girl090 February 5 2009, 12:02:00 UTC
*blushes* Thankyou! I try very hard to get Kaname right, he can be so difficult sometimes. His motivations are always ambiguous, and he has this weird submissive/dominant thing going on...but I do like to play with him. XD

*blushes some more* Aw, I'm really flattered. <3

LOL, well, I wouldn't want you to cry, so I might just have to write more. XD

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throwingtomatos March 28 2009, 12:24:40 UTC
Hi, are you going to post the other four parts again, since they can't be accessed any more on your previous journal? D8 Sorry, I just had an urge to read this fic again.

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ms_legerdemain June 8 2009, 14:11:41 UTC
Oh, thankyou for reminding me! Yes, I'll do that tomorrow. I'm glad you want to reread it, that makes me happy. :D

And sorry about the hideously late reply! This is the problem with account switiching...no comment alert Emails. :S

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hanamaruu July 21 2009, 00:35:43 UTC
an amazing fic! I teared up reading it

Hana

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