[Fanfiction] - Kira/Matsumoto, Gin/Kira, Gin/Matsumoto - Drunk

[ms_legerdemain]

Yes, it's been a while. A long while. After reading this, you may wish it had been a longer while, but I'm posting it regardless. I'm back reading Bleach, and for some reason this fic evolved out of a random Kira quote and mutated to become what it is now. I'm not hugely pleased with it, but I'm putting it out in the world nonetheless.

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Comments

[marisaserise]

Ma'am, after reading this -- you can write whatever the flying hell you want. I'm not even into Ulq/Grimmy and I'd be all over that.

There's so many things I want to say about this.

I mean, the flashbacks to Gin/Kira, the Matsu/Kira drunk-hate-sex that's heavy on the hate...

I love writers that take the time to really pull us in with a lot of word pictures and description. The last line - stars of silver.... so much meaning there.

Clipping this for my memories file... and encouraging you to pick up Aizen...not that I'm his loyal-like-Momo-without-the-stabbery fangirl, of course ;)

[ms_legerdemain]

Tehe, you flatter me. ♥ I'll remind you that you said that should I ever write that Ulq/Grimmy. :p

I never thought I'd write Matsu/Kira - for one thing, I don't usually write het, for another, I've never really even contemplated the paring. So I'm still a bit perplexed as to where this fic actually came from. I write a lot of hate sex though, so that's not really new. :p

Of course not. Why would I ever get that impression? xD

Thankyou for the comment, it made me smile!

[marisaserise]

I think you're into the Ulq/Grimmy for the hate sex :P heaven knows they're good for it...

;.; I'm waiting for someone to pick up the Aizen/Ulquiorra slash. If AiHime is valid, then Aizen/Grimm and Aizen/Ulquiorra need to be valid too. :D

I meant to comment moar and get detailed, but my hands locked up on me... carpal tunnel, you show up at the most awful times ;.;

Yer welcome :) I'll probably be wandering around your comm and watching for fics :) noticed you write for Kuroshitsuji -- I'm definitely interested in that too :D

[ms_legerdemain]

Quite possibly. xD It's not that I'm bitter and cynical about schmultzy, romantic sex, it's that I like the character dynamics you can explore with hate sex. *shifty eyes*

I have no real reason to be bitter and cynical, it's just the way I am.

I'm not even that into the pairing, but my dearest friend is and I have promised her I will see what I can do.

Oooooooh, Aizen/Ulqui. Nice. That would be a challenge to write...

Feel free, I like people wandering around this comm. XD I haven't written much for Kuro, because I've been a bit out of the fandom for a while...I keep meaning to get back into it, actually. I just haven't had the time.

Ouch, carpal tunnel. :( Well, never feel obligated to leave long comments. Mine are always crazily long, but that's just because I can't keep my mouth shut. :p

[denshi_no_ultra]

I liked this fic!

I loved the psychological aspect of it. You showed really well how Gin's betrayal made both Kira and Matsumoto bitter and devastated. I couldn't help but feel sorry for them, especially for Kira - your fic made him seem so vicious and hateful. It looks like he can't cope with Gin's betrayal and is trying to make it hurt less by hurting other people, and feels resentful that he wasn't his ex-captain's only toy.

Matsumoto's answer to Kira's question was really good - I wonder if that is true or she just said it to hurt him. Man, it totally looks like there is some masochism thing going on - they hurt each other to feel better.

I really liked your style of writing, the images you create are quite powerful, and the last lines of the fic were absolutely brilliant.

Thank you for writing this, it was an interesting fic.

[ms_legerdemain]

I'm glad you like it! :D

Thankyou, I had a bit of a crisis about my characterisation, so that is very reassuring. I've always felt sorry for Kira, so I didn't expect to end up writing him as being so cruel, but I did want to explore the idea that he'll hurt other people, and also try to provoke them into hurting him to make himself feel better. Oh Gin, you did a good job on those two.

Thankyou! Writing it was a pleasure. :)

[blood_crow]

*________* Kira's cruelty with Matsumoto was delicious. Fucking delicious. And her own cruelty in retaliation was just lovely.

I really adore this fic. No, adore is too sweet of a word. This fic made me all kinds of hot and bothered with its dark and twisted undertones.

AWESOME!

[ms_legerdemain]

XD

I am delighted you like it, because I love your fic and it makes me extra happy when authors I like also like my work. *bounces*

There was a lot of cruelty going around in this fic. Clearly I was in a bitchy mood when I wrote it. :p A character torture, how you allow me to vent. :p

♥

[ms_legerdemain]

Yes, I know, you are wise and knowing. ♥

I sort of have an idea for that Ulqui/Grimm...sort of...I don't know...I don't know if Grimmy getting nailed against a wall counts as fic idea...possibly not...

Don't worry, he's going to fuck Shuu next.

[letainajup]

Ooooo I do like how it involved drunk Kira and Matsumoto at first, and than turn to their lust/inner desires for Gin (in some way)! Especially Kira ;p Almost got the chills when he got dark and mocking towards Ran, so awesome! Xd Great work!!!

[ms_legerdemain]

Thankyou! I'm glad you liked it. :D Poor Kira, he's not a happy little muffin. He shouldn't take it out on poor Matsumoto though.