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ms_legerdemain in laudanumdreams

[Fanfiction] - Shuuhei Hisagi - Fool

Apr 25, 2010 10:50

Title: Fool
Fandom: Bleach
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG
Characters: Shuuhei Hisagi
Wordcount: 480
Warnings: Shuuhei being the angstalicious little muffin he is.
Disclaimer: Oh, if they were only mine...
Notes: Written for the queersouls100 challenge 'Fool', but unfortunately not able to be entered as I forgot the part where there needed to be a pairing. Oops. :p ( Read more... )

fanfiction: bleach

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ms_legerdemain May 12 2010, 23:45:37 UTC

Ikr? I volunteer for that duty. Official hugger-of-Shuuhei.

Thankyou. ♥

gypsygrrl420 April 25 2010, 04:49:33 UTC

Oh! this was beautifully tragic! I can practically taste Shuuhei's despair and pain on the back of my tongue...
Really, I love reading your works, and look forward to more!

ms_legerdemain May 12 2010, 23:45:07 UTC

Thankyou! I love writing introspective pieces, so writing this felt very self indulgent. :p I'm glad people other than me enjoyed it.

xglimpsex April 26 2010, 16:54:00 UTC

I meant to comment this earlier, but RL stuff came up and I just fail as a friend.
This was great. I loved how Shuuhei internalized all of his fears, because it was just SO him.

And THIS:
If nobody took his hands he could use them to keep himself from falling apart.
Oh Shuuhei, you need someone to hold/beat/fuck the shit out of you.

ms_legerdemain May 12 2010, 23:44:29 UTC

Pft, you so do not fail. At all. Especially given that my reply to this comment is about two weeks after the fact. *winces*

Thankyou. ♥ He just strikes me as the sort of person who would internalise everything he was feeling in an attempt to keep it under control.

Oh yes. Luckily, that's why we have Kensei. xD