[Fanfiction] - Sanzo/Gojyo - Intimacy

[ms_legerdemain]

Soo, back in Saiyuki, isn't that exciting? I've had this sitting around for a while but just haven't gotten around to finishing it up and posting it (I have so very many fics in the almost-finished stage). Anyways, hopefully somebody will enjoy it, despite the fact I laid on the angst with a shovel.

Title: Intimacy
Fandom: Saiyuki
Genre: Angst

Comments

[kansouame]

Nice.....

Scary to think of an angsting Sanzo cleaning his gun as he visualizes Hakkai in Gojyo's arms. (You will have the 58 shippers cheering and the 39 shippers hoping the Goku makes Sanzo's life better! LOL)

Job well done. Caes-kun will like this. ^_^

[ms_legerdemain]

Thankyou! :)

Tehe, yeah, it is a slightly terrifying mental image in some ways. Oh dear, I didn't mean to encourage the 39. :p For a 53 girl, I really seem to like writing 3 with implied 58 just to see whether I can make poor little Sanzo angst. *pets Sanzo*

Thanks for reading!

[caeseria]

I loooooooooooooooooove you and want your internet babies. OMG, this is so awesome, this is just what I needed! ♥

This is like cake. Layers and layers of angst wrapped up in Sanzo-icing. I can taste it! LOL

I think you've captured Sanzo as he breaks so perfectly. He reminds me of Burial Sanzo, fragile but strong at the same time. This is so awesome I'm reduced to using silly words to describe your amazing talent. You rock!!

[ms_legerdemain]

XD Glad I could help! ♥

LOL, that is a great mental image. Except it sort of mutated in my head, and now I'm having images of Sanzo as one of those dancing girls who comes out of a cake...Good Lord...it is too early in the morning for that mental image :p

*blushes* You flatter me. I always try to be careful when I'm writing Sanzo angst, because I don't want to portray him as being weak or whiny; I want to write him as having a will of iron, but at the same time being unspeakably lonely in a lot of ways. He's so freaking strong, but I just can't imagone him being happy, alone as he is, with all the trauma in his past.

/ramble

[kel_no_sane]

This was amazing. Sad, but so good. I think you captured Sanzo very well.

[ms_legerdemain]

Thankyou! :D Glad you like it!

[ms_legerdemain]

Thankyou babe. ♥ Yes, it is a bit sad, isn't it? Poor Sanzo. I started writing it aaaaaages ago, don't know what headspace I was in when I did...I'm guessing not a good one. :p

Yeah, I miss it a bit too. Though not quite enough to start watching my Filler Reload DVDs...

You are not uncreative. Not at all.

[lauand]

T_T

I'm usually more comfortable with happy endings, but I loved this piece of angst. It's great how you came back and forth between the cold, clinical act of cleaning the gun and the turmoiled feelings of the person doing it. And I especially love how all the things you told and left untold define Sanzo's character without saying "he's like that".

[ms_legerdemain]

Thankyou! That was pretty much what I was aiming for, so I'm glad you think so. :)

Next time I'll try to work in a happy ending. :p