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ms_legerdemain in laudanumdreams

[Fanfiction] - Bleach - Flexibility (4.1/?)

Feb 12, 2011 22:50

Well, this fic is giving me hell. However, I've had the first chunk of chapter 4 completed for quite some time, so I though I'd post it as I need a pick-me-up and posting fic always improves my mood. I'm hoping the lag period hasn't made you all give up on this fic completely. :p No smut in this part, but there will be in the second installment of ( Read more... )

fanfiction: bleach, multipart: flexibility, fanfiction

Comments 12

gypsygrrl420 February 12 2011, 13:02:37 UTC

You're back! Yes! And damn thsi was awesome!

Oh Byakuya, we knew you wouldn't be able to resist Renji and a motorcyle--the boy scream bad boy sex god!

I totally went there with the interaction of Kensei and Lisa, and was not at all disappointed that they were talking about Kensei's gun~ Lol. (Oh dear, I adore the concept of her next series too, and poor, poor Shuuhei beig the character sketch of the main character).

Damn fine work!

ms_legerdemain February 12 2011, 21:08:46 UTC

I don't know if it counts, as I've had this little bit written for aaaaages, but yes, hopefully I will be back properly soon. xD And thankyou, I'm glad you don't think I've lost my touch.

Exactly. I have plans for that motorcycle. *evil cackle*

I had way too much fun writing Lisa. I think I simultaneously have a crush on her and want to be her.

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ms_legerdemain February 12 2011, 21:12:05 UTC

Kensei's dreams are going to be haunted by that image. Possibly forever. :p

And yes, Ukitake and Shinji. I don't know how much direct interaction there'll be, but we shall see. This fic is like an amalgamation of every random couple I like to ship. :p

It always reminds me of Gin to. I was just too lazy to really go and find something else, and I find that their other songs just don't do it for me as much. They just don't go in for the crazy speed quite as much. I like the crazy speed.

Hopefully the next part will be as long and dark and this is short and fun. :p Well, not too dark, but plot actually needs to happen. On the plus side, Byakuya gets to eat pizza with his fingers. *pets him*

ichibanseiken February 12 2011, 21:58:52 UTC

Pizza: when I went out for pizza for the first time, I requested fork and knife and USED them. I was 16...and there was no way I was going it eat with my fingers, especially not in public :-) There were 20 of us and I was the only kid, and they all thought it was funny and weird. It was a Czech thing, now the Czech culture has finger-food, too.

ichibanseiken February 12 2011, 13:49:16 UTC

It' early Saturday where I live (yawn...) Checking LJ while waiting for the dough to knead, the first thing I see is "Flexibility". SWQUEEE! I don't think I need coffee anymore ( ... )

ms_legerdemain February 12 2011, 21:19:04 UTC

Thankyou! Tehe, I'm honoured that my fic can operate as a substitute for coffee. Speaking of coffee...*looks longingly towards the stove ( ... )

ichibanseiken February 12 2011, 21:53:02 UTC

Maybe it's good that Bya comes across as a soft-ass geeky type. That way, Renji can be pleasantly surprised and awed. After all, we all have our expectations of these characters, but in your AU they won't know all that about themselves right away ( ... )

xglimpsex February 12 2011, 17:21:44 UTC

YES! YES! YES! YES!

Jesus. Your Lisa is just... too fucking perfect.
I could just see this whole thing play out, and Kensei's handling of her... *swoon*

...Ukitake/Shinji? Um. YES FUCKING PLEASE.

ms_legerdemain February 12 2011, 21:21:09 UTC

xDDDDD Thankyou! I'm so glad you liked Lisa.

Writing Lisa and Kensei in the same room together inevitably makes me want to write Kensei/Shuuhei/Lisa so badly.

Oh yes. I have introduced another side pairing. Don't know how much time I'm going to give them (as writing both of them freaks me out), but we shall see.

drabbleandfluff February 13 2011, 01:03:40 UTC

Is it terrible that when I read of Renji spilling his hair out of his helmet I thought of one of those hair commercials where the ladies throw their heads back in slo-mo... and their glorious and voluminous cascade of hair softly frames their heads to lush music? XD Oh Renji, you lady man Byakuya-killer you!

Mmmm.... leather and motorcycles are so Renji.^^ *has warm thoughts*

I liked that the second part was from Kensei's POV, :) you've not written him before have you? eheeehee.. Kensei's gun. Naughty. I love Lisa, she's such a perv. and so unapologetic about it.

I look forward to the second half! (the smutty half!) :P

(..as an aside, and not that you ever have to comment on anything i write, but I've posted your prompts, and I just wanted to make sure you'd seen them. ^^)