[Fanfiction] - Matt/Mello - Forgive Me

[gypsy_girl090]

First DN fic. Something random I wrote, because Matt and Mello are OTP, and I'm not brave enough to take on L and Light. :p

Title: Forgive Me
Fandom: Death Note
Word Count: 1763
Beta: kashibanohikari
Genre: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Angst
Characters/Pairing: MattxMello, MelloxMatt, MelloxOCxMatt
Rating: R
Warnings: Yaoi, non-explicit sex, angst, blood, threesome

Comments

[miseri_cord]

D:
That's the best thing I've read in a long time.

I adored your word use. Really, you don't find many people who use the word 'quixotic' anymore.

[gypsy_girl090]

*blushes* Thankyou! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

This is a pity, because 'quixotic' is really a great word. :p Is it possible to be a word fangirl? If it is, then I am very guilty. I love words. Always have, always will.

*strokes thesaurus lovingly*

XD

[miseri_cord]

^_^ I'm with you on that one. I just hate how people don't appreciate words. :shakes head:

[gypsy_girl090]

My pleasure, I'm glad you liked it! I love your icon, by the way, it's gorgeous. Says so much with so little.

[azalee_calypso]

I confirm that the OC use is very, very, VERY well done. Not sure when was the last time I read an OC that made a fic that hot. The opening scene is incredible.
Really gorgeous style also ; I love the metaphors, the allegories, the repetitions. And 'quixotic' XD