[Fanfiction] - Gojyo/Sanzo - Friction

[ms_legerdemain]

Title: Friction
Fandom: Saiyuki
Word Count: 1464
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: 53
Warnings: Yaoi (yes, rly), bad language, violence in a sexual context (though not actual sexual violence), blood, minor recylcing of own ideas from past fics, self indulgent reference to the song 'Sexy Bitch' by Daivd Guetta feat. Akon.
Notes: Written for the Saiyuki Kink

Comments

[suanz]

Hawwtt!!

This is the 3rd time I'm reading this ^___^

[ms_legerdemain]

Tehe, mission accomplished. XD

[xglimpsex]

This was wonderful.
I loved how you carried over the violence of their relationship into intimacy, without needing to overstate the way their personalties clash.

Not to mention you made the violence terribly sexy, something,--I've found-- that alot of writers struggle with. They either end up too light on the violence, or far too heavy on it, but this was the perfect combination.

Thank you for sharing it.
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[ms_legerdemain]

Thankyou. ♥

I really like relationships with an element of violence - that's probably a sad commentary on my character. :p It's one of the reasons I tend to like writing yaoi, I'm more comfortable exploring issues of violence between people of the same gender than I am in instances of het...

I'm glad you think I found the balance. :D

My pleasure. Really. XD

[nochick_fics]

OP here. Still still STILL loving this so hardcore.

Thanks again!!! <3

[ms_legerdemain]

XD

As long as you're happy, my work here is done.

My pleasure! Writing these boys is always way too much fun.

[jakondas]

oo, now this is just lovely. I love all the little thoughts they refuse to say to each other, and the comment about no-one ever having taught Sanzo the difference between sex and violence. The whole thing really fits both their characters perfectly. Very well done. ^_^

[ms_legerdemain]

Thankyou very much! ♥

These two...I love their relationship because it's so open to playing around with sex and violence and what isn't said.

[caeseria]

Perfect as always! This is just a riot of jumbled emotion, unspoken words and searingly hot sexxin. I love you for this. (again). You always seem to find a balance between their feelings and unspoken thoughts and your descriptions are just brilliant!! ♥

[ms_legerdemain]

Aaaaaw, thankyou. XD *blushes*

Someone now totally has to fulfil my kink meme request...surely karma dictates that that must occur...*off in world of wishful thinking* :p

[caeseria]

If the world was a happy, right, place, your request should be fulfilled ;) *goes off to guess your prompt*

♥