it really makes you wonder... ya know?

[laughingloud24]

 
Distant sounds of rubber tires and cement roads

Keep me awake tonight

And I wonder, can you hear what I hear

Are you lying awake too?

I contemplate my self-worth. Have I made any mistakes today?

And you, what about you… I hate you, and I love you.

I hate that.

My petite fingers glide across this keyboard

With the hope of honesty pouring out

With the hope

Comments

[_lackadaisy_]

You poet, you.
Very nice.

I really, really like the end of it, and the part about the dream.

... it's kind of a sad poem, though. I hope all is well..

[laughingloud24]

I'm not gonna say 'all' is well, but all is definately, the same as 'all' has been...

Thanks. I was feeling extra poetic last night... so, I stayed up late, and wrote this... although, once I wrote the part about the music outside, I really don't think it was actually music, I think it was just outside noises... =))

[kates9]

woah that's deep.
it makes me depressed.

[anonymous]

That's pretty amazing. If you wrote it.