Stage Breakup - Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy - PG-13

Dec 13, 2005 11:18

Title: Stage Breakup

Pairing: Draco Malfoy/Harry Potter

Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: Actually, yes, I am JK Rowling and I'm wasting my time posting fics on the internet. *guh* No, I lied. Really. Apart from the fact that Draco Malfoy and Harry Potter have currently taken up board inside my brain...I do not own them. Only the sordid little affairs ( Read more... )

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law_of_sines December 13 2005, 02:20:45 UTC
i love the way you write dialogue! it always sounds real and convincing. good job!

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nagain December 13 2005, 03:11:40 UTC
Hahaha - this was awesome. It's nice to see that Hogwarts is still just a school and everyone is interested in everyone elses sordid affairs *grin* (And h/d in a broom closest - how very ironic!)

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just_defy_me December 13 2005, 03:09:07 UTC
Heh, first fic of its kind that I've read, but I like. The way you've written the dialogue between the two fifth years, going back and forth so quickly made it seem giddy and gossipy. Nice. H/D = OTP!

:3

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ninja_tech December 13 2005, 03:12:44 UTC
That was great! I could just hear it. Gossip must be fun to write. Oh--and I especially liked the part where Draco says, "It sounds like ‘Harry’ is doing unspeakable things to ‘Potter’". That part completely cracked me up! *gives thumbs up*

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bluemonkeyz8 December 13 2005, 04:13:43 UTC
*is doubled over with the giggles*

I loved this! The last convo was great.

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iluvshajalan December 13 2005, 04:35:15 UTC
haha that was great! Loved the dialogue!

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OMG lithium_barbie6 December 14 2005, 00:47:42 UTC
iluvshajalan, HOly shit your icon rules! Can I use it please? Will credit.

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Re: OMG iluvshajalan December 14 2005, 23:56:47 UTC
I didn't make it, but you can take it, just credit laurel_tx!

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