Comments | laughs_muses: Jealousy - Draco Malfoy/Harry Potter

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Jealousy - Draco Malfoy/Harry Potter - PART XII, PART XIV, PART XV

Jan 28, 2006 11:56

Title: Jealousy: PART XIII, XIV, XV

Author: laughs_muses (fic journal)

Pairing: Draco Malfoy/Harry Potter

Rating: PG-13, PG-13, PG-13

Disclaimer: No, none of these characters are mine. If they were mine I wouldn’t be working absurd hours in a coffee shop, now would I? Nup, I’d be cruising around in my Merc with little HP flags on the bonnet and…*dreams*

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fomp January 28 2006, 02:59:14 UTC

but I love sex ice cream.

Harry gave a shatteringly sad sigh in his sleep omg. I /heard/ that line. nice work.

more soon! -threatening fist- ♥♥.

penguin88 January 28 2006, 03:31:25 UTC

Aha. And the plot continues... I'm afraid that I think that your Draco's a bit of spunk as well. The way that you write him, I can easily see him getting into a relationship with Harry. His little obsessive tendencies (like watching Harry fly, for example) are well written and feel almost tender. I also like the harshness (not a word *cringes*) of each of the boys having a girlfriend and not wuite knowing what's what. Wonderful work, I'll be hoping for more soon.

areadyheart January 28 2006, 03:48:43 UTC

could one of you pretty please explain the phrase "bit of spunk" for me? thank you ever so :)

penguin88 January 28 2006, 12:18:38 UTC

To tell the truth, I'm really not sure. I just used it because I thought it was cute when I saw it in your author's notes here: "So, huh? Hermione thinks Draco's a bit of a spunk. Well, well, well."
So. Nothing profound. I'm just using your words and not very well :)!

shuga34 January 29 2006, 02:41:13 UTC

I always thought "spunk" was another word for cum......

Thread 6

areadyheart January 28 2006, 03:39:37 UTC

awwww! poor harry, he just needs a shag hug! glad he told ginny off, though. hmph. and yay for wandless magic; the power totally turns me on :D

slyfoxesq January 28 2006, 04:07:08 UTC

The last sentence of your comment made me laugh out loud, and then to my surprise I realised I feel exactly the same way. XD

areadyheart January 28 2006, 04:28:55 UTC

i wonder if it's as big a turn on for everyone else as it is for me... or us, rather. ;) something about that harnessing of raw power just elates me. usually i'm much more attracted to draco in fic, but the ones that feature harry doing wandless magic.. well, i really enjoy harry in those. hehe ♥

laughs_muses January 28 2006, 04:33:25 UTC

I know exactly what you mean. I like Draco being the caluclating, cruel but intelligent one...but I LOVE the thought of the power that resonates of Harry. It amazes me how it just involutarily leads to sex. It is just amazing. Sorry, just thought I'd chip in.

Jess

Thread 5

original_lie January 28 2006, 03:39:41 UTC

want... more... please?!?!

Heh, I'm so addicted to this fic XD it's so interesting. Although, when there's no more my heart leaps slightly and I get all sad. I want more 'cause well I like it - mmmhmmm.

Aww, poor Harry and Draco need their heads slammed together *shakes head* then maybe they wouldn't play games.

I'm in love with your Ron XD yay for good friends who just want their mates to be happy.

*mwah*

after_midnight_ January 28 2006, 05:41:09 UTC

theres just so much i love about this story. I like how youre not rushing into things, and its all developing quite nicely.
And I agree with you about Ron! A lot of ppl make poor Ron seem so stupid. Hooray for your Ron. And hooray for ice cream sex!
Hell, hooray for your awesome fic!
<3