Jealousy: PART XLII, PART XLIII, PART XLIV

[laughs_muses]

JEALOUSY UPDATE!

Title: Jealousy: PART XLII, PART XLIII, PART XLIV

Author: laughs_muses (fic journal)

Pairing: Draco Malfoy/Harry Potter

Rating: PG-13, NC-17, PG-13

Disclaimer: No, none of these characters are mine. If they were mine I wouldn’t be working absurd hours in a coffee shop, now would I? Nup, I’d be cruising around in my Merc with little HP

Comments

[fomp]

:(
YOU CANNOT JUST KEEP STRINGING US ALONG LIKE THIS MISSY.
Anyways you know we loved it. now write more. ;D

[penguin88]

Guh. I certainly did not see things coming. I guess that I tend to see the world in fluff-tinted glasses or something of that sort. I love the raw energy between the boys - but I do hope that they are each able to get over it. I rather like them together. Yet you did write their break up scene beautifully. I love the pacing of that scene, and the harsh jealousy that each of them share for different purposes. Draco's hurt and disappointment was especially vivid to me.

Oh! And I loved the uniform strangulation piece! I know that this is probably not what you were intended, but it reminded me of that whole scandal about Janet Jackson's costume malfunction during the half-time show with Justin Timberlake during last year's Superbowl. The mind works in mysterious ways or maybe it is just me.

[laughs_muses]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh good God, you're exactly right! Now I won't be able to read that sequence again without picturing Janet Jackson's boob.

[hpfan723]

No no no no no no no no no no no!! They've got to get back together!

More Please&&ThankYou

[painfulove]

YES!!!! JESS!!! YOU'RE ALIVE!!! *screamsflyingtacklehugs* WHEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Okay, that's done. Excellent chapters as usual. I LOVED the encounter between them at the end of the last chapter. SO perfect. Hurry up and write more, woman!!

Mucho hearts,
Kat

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