Fic: Failure to Communicate

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Title: Failure to Communicate (1/1)
Author: laughter_now
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 12.977 words - seriously, I don't know how that happened!
Disclaimer: I don't own anything except the bare hints at a plot that might appear in this story somewhere.
Summary: Sleep is a necessary human function. However, as Jim is about to find out, there are certain

Comments

[mallorypen]

Oh, angsty Bones. You shouldn't worry about getting too old, because Jim makes you act like a teenager. Oh, boys! *squishes them* Lovely fic! Thank you for sharing.

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THanks for the lovely comment. And you're right, of course Bones never gets too old for Jim, he just needed a little reminder.

[blcwriter]

Lovely. Just perfect.

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Thanks so much, bb!

[caera1996]

I love the way you write the two of them. All of it - the dialogue, the internal thoughts, the descriptions when they're together. And I really liked Nyota in this, too. She felt very real.

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Thank you so much! It's especially good to hear that Nyota felt real to you, since I always have problems writing female characters. I'm really thrilled that you enjoyed it, thanks a lot.

[deerang2002]

Wonderful...it's so real, how just a small action can escalate, especially when we bring our insecurities into it...

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Yeah, it was a prompt that was very close to something we all probably know very well, so it was a real fun to write it. Thanks so much!

[just_jane_doe]

Love the way you break 'em apart and put 'em back together again - that's how relationships work and you always write theirs so realistically, that the journey is always familiar and new at the same time. Loved this - thanks for sharing it!!

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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. It's really a great compliment, and I'm absolutely thrilled to hear that you liked the story.