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Fic: Isolation (1/1)

Jul 15, 2010 21:11

Title: Isolation
Author: laughter_now
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 5671 words
Pairing: Jim/Bones
Disclaimer: I don't own anything, no matter how many wishes I make.
Summary: He got it, really. Everyone had a job to do. Life aboard a starship was busy, he understood that everyone had better things to do than to come by and watch him die a slow and painful ( Read more... )

fic: isolation, fanfic, rating: pg-13, star trek xi, kirk/mccoy, schmoop bingo, slash

Comments 57

dizilla July 15 2010, 22:57:11 UTC

Hee! I love how grumpy Bones' internal monologue is in he beginning, it's so endearing! Wonder what Jim would've made of it if he could hear it. This was excellent! =D

laughter_now July 18 2010, 20:52:42 UTC

Hehe, it was fun writing Bones as the grumpy patient who thinks up horror scenarios about his health. They do say doctors make the worst patients, after all.
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks a lot.

pearlstar178 July 15 2010, 23:07:40 UTC

Awww so sweet. Poor Bones, even sick he worries about Jim.
I feel sort of bad for the rest of the medical staff that have to deal with the two lovelies. A sick Bones and a worried Jim, what scary combo. Thanks so much for sharing this .

laughter_now July 18 2010, 20:54:12 UTC

Lol, I think it must be red alert in Medical whenever one of them is injured or sick, no matter which one. One day, maybe I'll write a story from M'Benga's or Christine's perspective about their coping mechanisms...that should be fun.
Thanks so much, it's great to hear that you enjoyed it.

caera1996 July 15 2010, 23:09:28 UTC

That was great! You really captured the disorienting effects of being out of it because of illness for so long. And I loved the care your Jim took of Leonard.

Really, really good job.

Caera

laughter_now July 18 2010, 20:55:02 UTC

I couldn't possibly *not* write a story about being sick without involving chicken soup in some form. Jim just took over from there...
I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you so much.

secretsolitaire July 15 2010, 23:29:39 UTC

D'awww. I had to laugh a little over Bones's "WOE IS ME" thoughts in the beginning, because who hasn't had a little pity party for themselves when they're sick? Poor thing. But Jim makes a good, sweet nurse. Lovely. ♥

laughter_now July 18 2010, 20:56:15 UTC

Admittedly, Bones had quite an epic pity party going on there, but yeah, we should totally cut the guy some slack. He has earned it. And who wouldn't want Jim as their personal nurse (with or without the proper outfit)? I know I'd be first in line.

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks!

caitri July 15 2010, 23:58:33 UTC

Awwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!! So sweet! *happy happy sigh*

laughter_now July 18 2010, 20:56:29 UTC

Thanks a lot!