It's in every single one of us.

[laughtersaves]

There is something oddly comforting about stop lights. Especially stop lights at night, during summer. The air is sticky and sweet and it's warmth evelopes you completely, wrapping those acrid molecules around your tiny face. And as you casually look around, from car to car. From Mercedes to Pinto, people are quitely living their own lives and

Comments

[jdinosaur]

that was beautiful. I'm not even being sarcastic, it really was. It warmed my heart like hot chocolate on a rainy fall day. Kudos to you my dear.

[laughtersaves]

thanx jackie :)

[pigmentoftruth]

Wow.
I wish I could write like that.
You are fantastic.

[laughtersaves]

thank you :)

[ceemo]

I could picture it. When you say traffic light it makes me think of passing the blinking yellow light on 75th and Rose Garden and then getting stuck at the light on 75th and Deer Valley in the left turn lane. Wow, I liked how your writing made me visualize.

[laughtersaves]

visualization is key.

hmmmm

[anonymous]

It just gets too wordy. I mean I get it, a fuckin stop light, a waste of gas, and one more akward moment for the guy getting some while driving. I don't know, its good, its great, Sounds like someone was doing drugs

Re: hmmmm

[laughtersaves]

Too wordy? Would you prefer I use symbols instead to get my point across? I mean if it has too many words and all? Maybe next time I WRITE something---I'll consider your opinion. Maybe not.

Re: hmmmm

[fromaemptyheart]

i suggest you write your next entry in wingdings

Re: hmmmm

[laughtersaves]

I was just going to go with all smiley faces, all the time. We'll all get a laugh out of that I think.

[theoc_lover]

Jessica, I thought it was wonderful and also made me visualize driving. You are such a gifted writer!

[laughtersaves]

Why thank you my lil bean.