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South Park: "The Lie That You Adore" (Craig/Tweek) CHAPTER 1

Sep 30, 2009 14:58

Title: The Lie That You Adore
Chapter: One
Fandom: South Park
Characters/Pairings: Craig/Tweek, Craig Tucker, Tweek Tweak, Token Black, Clyde Donovan
Rating: PG-13
Narrative: Craig's POV, first person
Genre: Romance
Length: 2 chapters so far
Warnings: Slash
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: I do not own South Park
Author's Note: Part 1. Ah, my South Park OTP. My ( Read more... )

south park, craig/tweek, fanfiction, craig tucker

Comments 5

ienvy October 1 2009, 04:08:34 UTC

I really like the initial set up of this! It's definitely something different and I really like the way it stands out. I love the way you wrote it from Craig's perspective and I think that you manage to even Craig out without going too far to one side (there are so many different ways that people write him, it's nice to see something that is in the middle). I also like how you have him so naive throughout the conversation he's listening in on, as if he's already in denial that he doesn't even bother considering Tweek gay or Tweek having the crush on him.

All in all, it's really interesting so far and I haven't read a good Creek fic where the relationship is like this. I can't quite place my finger on it, but I do like it. =3

laultimahora32 October 1 2009, 18:03:42 UTC

Thank you so much - I'm glad that you liked it!
I tried to make it a bit different to some other Craig/Tweek stories I've read, so I'm glad that you think it worked!
I tried hard with writing Craig, I wanted to make him seem real and to be true to what we know about him from the show. I wasn't sure that I had succeeded, but I'm really happy that you liked my portrayal of him!
Thank you so much for your review, really made me feel encouraged to write more.

Also, I'm in love with your icon <3

ienvy October 1 2009, 21:05:42 UTC

Well, I've been trying this new thing lately. It's called leaving detailed comments. Generally, writers are a lot more inspired to write when they get an actual amount of feedback from their readers. =3

And thanks. ;3

laultimahora32 October 2 2009, 08:20:33 UTC

Haha, well it's a very good idea, it definitely works. Knowing what exactly the reader liked/didn't like really helps particularly. So thank you very much, it certainly worked for me! *instantly wants to write more*

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laultimahora32 February 16 2010, 16:20:02 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Craig/Tweek has got to be my favourite SP pairing.