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laura_muse

TM 275. Retrospect

Mar 28, 2009 17:54

"That's why I write, because life never works except in retrospect. You can't control life, at least you can control your own version." -- Chuck Palaniuk (Stranger Than Fiction: True Stories)

.You haven't got anything other than retrospect left. You don't have time to write, nor to seek to control the actions of others. All you have now is a bit of ( Read more... )

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laurandbillever March 29 2009, 00:16:06 UTC

oh... that made me so sad... good work!

OOC laura_muse March 31 2009, 12:19:44 UTC

Thanks! This is certainly not the end from where I'm standing. Get ready for some happy!Laura (or at least content!Laura until Bill joins her) on the other side and more from the past!

Re: OOC laurandbillever March 31 2009, 17:10:15 UTC

sounds like a good plan! ^_^

number_eight March 30 2009, 23:40:53 UTC

OOC: Very nice! A great send-off for Laura. Love the use of second-person POV.

OOC laura_muse March 31 2009, 12:28:16 UTC

Thanks! I'll admit, I was halfway through it and having mad trouble before I even though of using second-person. I was toying all week between first and third, then I hit on the idea that perhaps her body was slowly disconnecting her from herself.

The last few moments are a little hinky, but overall I'm content with it.

you_rock April 10 2009, 22:10:04 UTC

For taking the canon of the show and expanding on it perfectly, you TOTALLY ROCK!

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number_eight May 19 2009, 15:35:31 UTC

OOC: Congrats on Laura's nomination at the_tammyawards!

OOC laura_muse May 19 2009, 16:59:57 UTC

Whazzis now?

How did I miss the noms?

*goes off to investigate*

Thanks for the heads' up and I'm assuming the nom. I sent a few in, but it totally slipped my mind.