Doctor Who - fic - Burning Bright, Nine/Rose/Jack/TARDIS, 12
This is basically my naughty little story, Flexible Dancer, from the old girl's POV ;)
Title - Burning Bright
Author - laurab1
Rating - 12, a tiny bit adult
Foursome - Nine/Rose/Jack/TARDIS
Length - 760 words
Summary - Seconds later, the human male Rose has identified as Jack is inside you.
Spoilers - DW 1.7 The Long Game, 1.9 The Empty Child & 1.10 The Doctor Dances
Disclaimer - alas, none of these people are mine
Note - written in the 2nd person, to see if I could, for karaokegal’s Come As You’re Not Party
Feedback is loved and appreciated :) Enjoy!
Burning Bright
by Laura
He lands you inside another ship. You sense some new presences; electronic, and human. He opens your doors. You play some music, and the two of them try to dance.
Rose looks out of you and says, "Well? Hurry up then!"
Seconds later, the human male she’s identified as Jack is inside you. He’s certainly amazed by you. And possibly even aroused.
Your Doctor and Rose stop their dancing attempts. “Shut the door. Your ship's about to blow up. There's gonna be a draft," he tells Jack, who immediately obeys. Rose leans against you, while your Doctor starts up the engines. "Welcome to the TARDIS," he says.
"...much bigger on the inside..." Jack whispers.
"You'd better be," your Doctor replies.
Rose suddenly becomes bright yellow, grabs Jack’s hand and encourages him further inside you. "I think what the Doctor's trying to say is...you may cut in."
And he turns bright yellow as well. So does your Doctor, exclaiming, "Rose! I've just remembered!" Your speakers play a human tune, In The Mood. “I can dance!”
“I thought that Captain Jack might like this dance,” Rose says.
Your Doctor...winks at her. "I'm sure he would, Rose. I'm absolutely certain...but who with?"
...More flexible, when it comes to dancing...goes over the surface of Rose’s mind, before she goes back to your Doctor, and they dance around you.
Then, Rose dances with Jack, to another human tune, Moonlight Serenade. The yellow is turning into orange, they’re close together, and he ends with a kiss to the back of her hand. Like the song, this is familiar to them. Rose grins at Jack, both of them are still glowing. He passes her back to your Doctor, and they dance again. Jack watches them, and his orange becomes red.
Lust. Passion. Love.
But something’s...off, wrong.
You scan his mind without him sensing you, only to discover a dreadful mess; broken glass everywhere. Oh, he definitely needs help, this one. You gently push at the surface of his mind, making sure he can sense you, this time.
Jack acknowledges you, lets you inside. You surround him with warmth and love. He burns, bright red. The words telepathy and sentience go around and around in his mind. He certainly understands you more than the last human male who travelled inside you.
“Is the TARDIS telepathic, Doctor?” he asks, when your Doctor and Rose finish their dance and return to him.
“Yeah. She in your head?”
“Yes, sir. Very much so.” Another burst of lust.
Which he then manages to transfer to you.
“Oi! No flirting with my ship!” your Doctor warns.
“She sentient, then?”
“What do you think, Captain?” Your Doctor looks him straight in the eye, and walks back over to your console.
It really would be perfectly alright if Jack flirted with you, so you find the beat of his blood from the hand he’s placed on you, and pulse at him. In reply, Jack slowly, repeatedly, strokes his hand up and down you. From you, and him, the pulsing becomes more intense.
And you all four burn bright red.
Oh, my..., as the humans say. You’d consider stronger words, but Rose starts to speak.
“Jack?” she whispers, eyes wide. “Did you just do what I think you did?”
“Yeah, Rose,” he says, grinning shamelessly. He’s still red, but only burning gently, now. “Wasn’t she gorgeous?”
“She was,” Rose replies, smiling, but looking a little confused. “Listen to me, discussing a ship...whatever.” She rolls her eyes, turns away from him.
“Climaxing,” he finishes, bluntly. “Coming, having an orgasm, however you want to put it. And I think she’s a lot more than just a ship, Rose.” Jack puts an arm round Rose’s shoulders, pulling her close.
“You’ve only been here ten minutes, and you’ve already worked it all out, got her eating out of your hand...”
The girl’s right.
“The TARDIS is more than just a ship, Jack. She’s alive, she’s beautiful, she’s in your head,” Rose says happily.
“And she’s mine,” your Doctor says, coming back to them. “Didn’t I tell you not to flirt with my ship, Captain?”
“Didn’t say I couldn’t do anything else with her, though,” Jack says, wickedly.
The Doctor rolls his eyes at him. “Just stop it, you lot.”
“Yes, sir,” Jack and Rose both say, grinning at him.
You pulse some more, and Jack strokes you again. “Hey, beautiful,” he whispers to you. He then confirms what you’d expected, saying, “Yeah, I love the two of them, and you as well.”
You and Jack will get on absolutely perfectly.
-end-
Tyger! Tyger! burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?
The Tyger, William Blake
***
crosspost:
better_with_3
galactic_conman
dwfiction
new_who
iamthebadwolf
Teaspoon
Title - Burning Bright
Author - laurab1
Rating - 12, a tiny bit adult
Foursome - Nine/Rose/Jack/TARDIS
Length - 760 words
Summary - Seconds later, the human male Rose has identified as Jack is inside you.
Spoilers - DW 1.7 The Long Game, 1.9 The Empty Child & 1.10 The Doctor Dances
Disclaimer - alas, none of these people are mine
Note - written in the 2nd person, to see if I could, for karaokegal’s Come As You’re Not Party
Feedback is loved and appreciated :) Enjoy!
Burning Bright
by Laura
He lands you inside another ship. You sense some new presences; electronic, and human. He opens your doors. You play some music, and the two of them try to dance.
Rose looks out of you and says, "Well? Hurry up then!"
Seconds later, the human male she’s identified as Jack is inside you. He’s certainly amazed by you. And possibly even aroused.
Your Doctor and Rose stop their dancing attempts. “Shut the door. Your ship's about to blow up. There's gonna be a draft," he tells Jack, who immediately obeys. Rose leans against you, while your Doctor starts up the engines. "Welcome to the TARDIS," he says.
"...much bigger on the inside..." Jack whispers.
"You'd better be," your Doctor replies.
Rose suddenly becomes bright yellow, grabs Jack’s hand and encourages him further inside you. "I think what the Doctor's trying to say is...you may cut in."
And he turns bright yellow as well. So does your Doctor, exclaiming, "Rose! I've just remembered!" Your speakers play a human tune, In The Mood. “I can dance!”
“I thought that Captain Jack might like this dance,” Rose says.
Your Doctor...winks at her. "I'm sure he would, Rose. I'm absolutely certain...but who with?"
...More flexible, when it comes to dancing...goes over the surface of Rose’s mind, before she goes back to your Doctor, and they dance around you.
Then, Rose dances with Jack, to another human tune, Moonlight Serenade. The yellow is turning into orange, they’re close together, and he ends with a kiss to the back of her hand. Like the song, this is familiar to them. Rose grins at Jack, both of them are still glowing. He passes her back to your Doctor, and they dance again. Jack watches them, and his orange becomes red.
Lust. Passion. Love.
But something’s...off, wrong.
You scan his mind without him sensing you, only to discover a dreadful mess; broken glass everywhere. Oh, he definitely needs help, this one. You gently push at the surface of his mind, making sure he can sense you, this time.
Jack acknowledges you, lets you inside. You surround him with warmth and love. He burns, bright red. The words telepathy and sentience go around and around in his mind. He certainly understands you more than the last human male who travelled inside you.
“Is the TARDIS telepathic, Doctor?” he asks, when your Doctor and Rose finish their dance and return to him.
“Yeah. She in your head?”
“Yes, sir. Very much so.” Another burst of lust.
Which he then manages to transfer to you.
“Oi! No flirting with my ship!” your Doctor warns.
“She sentient, then?”
“What do you think, Captain?” Your Doctor looks him straight in the eye, and walks back over to your console.
It really would be perfectly alright if Jack flirted with you, so you find the beat of his blood from the hand he’s placed on you, and pulse at him. In reply, Jack slowly, repeatedly, strokes his hand up and down you. From you, and him, the pulsing becomes more intense.
And you all four burn bright red.
Oh, my..., as the humans say. You’d consider stronger words, but Rose starts to speak.
“Jack?” she whispers, eyes wide. “Did you just do what I think you did?”
“Yeah, Rose,” he says, grinning shamelessly. He’s still red, but only burning gently, now. “Wasn’t she gorgeous?”
“She was,” Rose replies, smiling, but looking a little confused. “Listen to me, discussing a ship...whatever.” She rolls her eyes, turns away from him.
“Climaxing,” he finishes, bluntly. “Coming, having an orgasm, however you want to put it. And I think she’s a lot more than just a ship, Rose.” Jack puts an arm round Rose’s shoulders, pulling her close.
“You’ve only been here ten minutes, and you’ve already worked it all out, got her eating out of your hand...”
The girl’s right.
“The TARDIS is more than just a ship, Jack. She’s alive, she’s beautiful, she’s in your head,” Rose says happily.
“And she’s mine,” your Doctor says, coming back to them. “Didn’t I tell you not to flirt with my ship, Captain?”
“Didn’t say I couldn’t do anything else with her, though,” Jack says, wickedly.
The Doctor rolls his eyes at him. “Just stop it, you lot.”
“Yes, sir,” Jack and Rose both say, grinning at him.
You pulse some more, and Jack strokes you again. “Hey, beautiful,” he whispers to you. He then confirms what you’d expected, saying, “Yeah, I love the two of them, and you as well.”
You and Jack will get on absolutely perfectly.
-end-
Tyger! Tyger! burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?
The Tyger, William Blake
***
crosspost:
better_with_3
galactic_conman
dwfiction
new_who
iamthebadwolf
Teaspoon