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laure1724

Of Demons, Shifters and Maniacal Mages (Chapter 4)

Aug 30, 2013 04:41

Title: Of Demons, Shifters and Maniacal Mages (Chapter 4)
Character/Pairing: Jun/Chun, Jun/Ho (Junho/Yunho), some JaeChun, 2U bffery, awkward MinChun brothers
Genre: drama/angst, romance, and a bit of comedy, paranormal au
Rating: PG-13
Word Count:2,051
Disclaimer: I have a what?

Summary: Changmin is Yoochun's older half-demon, half-mage over- ( Read more... )

au: paranormal, fandom: dbsk, genre: drama, genre: romance, genre: supernatural/horror, pairing: junho/yunho, length: chaptered, pairing: junsu/yoochun

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ztarplay August 30 2013, 09:32:33 UTC

MINE!

ztarplay August 30 2013, 09:45:09 UTC

Okay,I'm a little confused by the back and forth with Jaejoong, Changmin and Yoochun... I'm sensing some of that wasn't meant to be in Jaejoong's mind or something? *Shrug*

Other than that, this was great. We get to see more of Changmin's motivations and true devotion. I'm not sure if I like Jaejoong yet though. Mhm. Looking forward to your next chapter. (^__^)

laure1724 August 30 2013, 09:47:35 UTC

oopps...

I totally forgot to add my divisions back in after I formatted it kekekeke

laure1724 August 30 2013, 09:59:14 UTC

I know it can be confusing to read

In a nut shell: Changmin and Jaejoong's discussion happened almost right after Changmin pops into the shop in Chapter 3 and what is happening with the group and Jaejoong and Yoochun is later that day.

I wanted to show how Jaejoong showing up was all part of Changmin's evil plan to keep Junsu away from Yoochun in steps as it was happening in 'real-time'.

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laure1724 August 30 2013, 19:03:05 UTC

Thanks sweetie :)
Changmin is certainly a bad boy >:D

abcdefghiluvyou August 30 2013, 17:38:49 UTC

ooooooh an update :DDD

brb rereading everything<3

abcdefghiluvyou August 30 2013, 18:04:48 UTC

okay wow, i must admit i was a bit confused this chapter since
all the talk between changmin and jaejoong and the current
happeningst switched without any warnings. had to read this
twice xD but that also means i had double fun haha

my minchun heart is fluttering hopefully, but i know that
this is not about them. thank god JunChun is lso my otp hahaha.

looking forward to the next chapter :-)

laure1724 August 30 2013, 19:05:15 UTC

I know it can be confusing to read the first time :/
But I'm glad you enjoyed it both times XD
There will be some JunChun next chapter, not to worry <3

snow_meow August 31 2013, 17:05:59 UTC

I cannot wait to read more.

Poor Changmin.
I can understand why he is so possessive over Yoochun.
But I am sure there has got to be a better way or an amicable solution.

laure1724 September 1 2013, 03:44:39 UTC

So glad you like it sweetie :)

I don't think Changmnin knows any other way to be :/