oooo i like i don't know why but i like you have some really great strong unusual descriptions goin on i really like the uh...all the stuff about the girl...that's really cool...like the girl who's more then a friend but can't be and when the secret is over she'll be yours yeah that stuff damn cool and umm... the last stanza is great too and uh...so's the first ::cheers:: love it! wee!
I'm sure you've been to their country. You know how it chafes when they appropriate the culture of something they don't understand. You know how you can do it better. It's like they're spinning in circles, grabbing at things that are almost in reach, and you want to tell them, "No, it sounds like this," but there's not much point. Nothing you can say will really make them understand
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i like
i don't know why
but i like
you have some really great strong unusual descriptions goin on
i really like the uh...all the stuff about the girl...that's really cool...like the girl who's more then a friend but can't be and when the secret is over she'll be yours
yeah
that stuff
damn cool
and umm...
the last stanza is great too
and uh...so's the first
::cheers::
love it!
wee!
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