Seventh Turning Cont..

[lauriel01]

Continuation of part 1...


I was set down in front of one of the strangers that had been with my father.  He was tall, dressed all in black.  His hazel eyes had tights lines around them as he regarded me.  I’ve often wondered what he thought of me, a small boy covered in smoke-grime and dirt.  My clothes were singed, and my hair, no longer fair

Comments

[rhymer23]

Ooh, I love outsider POVs, and I love the idea that our heroes' adventures are still being told by inhabitants of the Pegasus Galaxy many years later, passing them down to their children and grandchildren. This was lovely and very satisfying. Thanks for writing! :-)

[lauriel01]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, especially as it was your prompt! I hope it wasn't too much off the mark, as I did tackle it a little sideways. I'm sorry it was posted late, too.

[x_erikah_x]

Loved the story and the POV of a native. We need more of those. Very lovely.

[lauriel01]

Thanks Erika. Glad you enjoyed it.

[wildcat88]

Great story. I loved all the details of Stevani's world and his impressions of the team. Well done.

[lauriel01]

Thank you. It was a bit of a challenge to write entirely from an outsider pov and only show what he saw, and still convey the storyline, so it's great to hear some positive feedback on that. I'm glad it worked for you.

[lorr54]

Thank you so much! We forget the perspective of the outsiders, the people we touch. This was a lovely story, and reminder. Well done!

[lauriel01]

Thanks Lorr. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D