Myshuno # 3

[lauriempress]

Title: Untitled
Prompt: "I tried my best."
Word Count: 703
Characters: Strangetown Premades.  Mostly Buzz, Tank, and Ripp Grunt, PT, Johnny, and Jenny Smith, and Ophelia Nigmos.  However, everyone other than Ajay Loner is also around in the background.
Notes: Okay a bit of a book here.  This is background info for a story/neighborhood that I have

Comments

[penguingirl03]

Oooh cool! I enjoy this peek into the General's mind and how much he really does care about Ripp.

[Spoiler (click to open)]Glad to see all three of them make it!

[lauriempress]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. He really does care about all his boys. It's taken a lot to get him to a point where he can show it though.

[celebkiriedhel]

Wow! It's easy to make the General Mr. Evil, but you've done really well here showing that he has more feelings than just one.

Tank too. It's hard to be Tank and have feelings.

[lauriempress]

Oh it's very easy to let Buzz be all guns and prejudice and the kind of man that would make John Wayne seem a teddy bear. I decided to go a very different route this time. Oh and Tank. What I get from Tank is not that he lacks feelings, just lacks any knowledge of what to do with them.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!