Fic: One Complication Less (Sam/Dean, Adult)

Oct 01, 2013 22:42

Oh, final five minutes of season 8. How you are the gift that keeps on giving to me. Written for
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sam/dean, fic-supernatural

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pinkwithoutplot October 1 2013, 21:55:28 UTC
I love this <3 It's hot and sweet and sad and hopeful all at once. It's totally believable too. And "Eyebrows bravely crawling into his stupid hair" made me snort-laugh :D Wonderful job, bb!

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ashtraythief October 1 2013, 22:17:18 UTC
This was wonderful! Beautifully written, and I love you character voices. Very hot sex too of course :)

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chemm80 October 1 2013, 22:18:52 UTC
Then he pulls himself together, and goddamn him if he ever talks about Dean's game face again.

I'm in love with this line. It says more about the terrible, grinding shit they've been through together all by itself than volumes of fanfic before it.

"In the first place, you're not, and if you were, I wouldn't care.

I can hear Dean saying this so clearly.

This, however...

"In the third place, we're going to have sex."

I don't think I've ever read or thought about Dean saying, just laying (so to speak) it out on the table like this. I like it.

The consummation is sweet and hot and perfect, too. I'm kind of in awe at the way you made what could have been just a PWP into something so heartbreakingly beautiful. It's made me more excited for the show to be back than I've been all hiatus.

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staythenight October 2 2013, 01:12:12 UTC
Ah, so great!!

"You were dying, you moron. A dead you is the only you I don't want." He pauses, thinks. "Okay, there are a few other versions. Soulless you wasn't great, and high on demon blood you had a couple notable character flaws. But-dead you is the only thing I can't deal with." > by far the best part!

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killabeez October 1 2013, 22:23:20 UTC
Every single time you write these guys again, I have the same thought before I even click on it. "Oh, thank God." Is that weird? That might be weird. But it's like, I just need to know that sooner or later, one day, you will write another perfect, sweet, hot, tender love story between them. I can wait! I'm patient. But still.

Dean taking care of Sam, Just because he's never done this specific thing with Sam, that doesn't mean he doesn't know how to take Sam apart-I had to go back and read that line over a few times, because it's so hot I couldn't swallow the thought all in one go.

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peepingdru October 1 2013, 22:25:33 UTC
Sooooooooooooooooooooo good!!!!!!<<<<<333333

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