FICLET: In the Gloaming (George/Luna)

May 01, 2008 03:20

Title:  In the Gloaming
Character Pairing:  George/Luna for rarepair_shorts  
Prompt:  You and your neighbor
Rating:  G
Word Count:  1,448
Summary:  After a fight with his brothers, George seeks solace and ends up finding comfort in an unlikely place...and from someone he didn't expect.
Author's Notes:  This was a bit of a struggle for me to get out...I had the kernel ( Read more... )

george/luna, hp, fanfic, angst, het

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love_tart May 1 2008, 12:11:36 UTC
Oh that was wonderful! I absolutely adore George/Luna fics and this one was lovely. Well done!

ETA: The title sounds familiar to me...Is it from a Stephen King book?

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lauryne78 May 1 2008, 16:43:40 UTC
Thank you so much!! I'm so very glad you liked it!!

The title is actually from an Anne Elliot Dark short story, but several folks have used it...it's the name of a song, and a painting...and now, my ficlet!! :)

Best,
-Lauryne78

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peskywhistpaw May 1 2008, 23:57:17 UTC
Aww, that was so sweet! (Though sad, too, of course.) Your writing is lovely, and I really like the idea of George wanting to see Fred's death. It's rather morbid, but it makes sense. Great work!

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lauryne78 May 8 2008, 05:23:22 UTC
Thanks so much!! I was aiming for a balance of angst and fluff, so I'm happy that came across. I thought that though it is morbid, as you say, it would be something George needs (or thinks that he needs). Glad you liked it!!
Best,
-Lauryne78

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merlins_babe May 2 2008, 01:06:18 UTC
This story has been rec'ed at

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lauryne78 May 8 2008, 05:24:17 UTC
Oh wow!! I'm utterly honored by this...nothing I've ever written has been rec'ed before...
Thank you!!
Best,
-Lauryne78

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darth_kittius May 2 2008, 02:34:46 UTC
I had never really considered George/Luna until someone prompted me to write one and I have to say I think the pairing is fabulous. It just makes sense that she'd be the only one to pull him out of his pain. Fabulous job!

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lauryne78 May 8 2008, 05:27:44 UTC
I know what you mean!! It's a pairing that made me go "huh?" and then "oh, wait...yes!!" and then I fell in love with the work of a couple of wonderful authors who have written some amazing G/L pieces, found the lj georgeluna comm, and have never looked back!! They make so much sense to me...and I'm resolutely ignoring the "Scamander Revelation" JKR made...
I followed your link and read your piece as well, and I think it's lovely work!! I especially liked that she and George stayed friends even after she married Dean...wonderful work!!
Best,
-Lauryne78

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lauryne78 May 8 2008, 05:28:12 UTC
BTW: Love your icon!!

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c_starkiller May 2 2008, 23:55:33 UTC
Definitely one of the best George/Luna fics I have read. And you've inspired me to write more! Bonus points for that =D Oh, and I have to say your icon is hilarious XD x

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lauryne78 May 8 2008, 05:30:47 UTC
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it and happy I could inspire you!! I'm glad you like the icon...it's from a lovely graphic artist here on lj, Purely_Distel. If you go to their site and click on "Creative Cherry Graphic Designs" they've got *tons* of great stuff - Potter-related and not!!
Best,
-Lauryne78

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