FICLET: The Missing Piece (George/Luna)

Jun 02, 2008 04:30

Title:  The Missing Piece
Character Pairing:  George/Luna for rarepair_shorts
Prompt:  Children of the depression
Rating:  PG-13/super-light R  (just for the beginning section....)
Word Count:  1,336 (my shortest yet!!)
Summary:  George can't sleep...and if he can't have what he really wants, well then, cake will have to do.  Cameo by Shirtless!Ron...
Author's Notes:  ( Read more... )

george/luna, hp, fanfic, gen, angst

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love_tart June 2 2008, 11:00:06 UTC
*squee!!!!!!*

I LOVE it! Please, please, PLEASE tell me you are planning on writing the Hogsmeade weekend!

This was so lovely! I adore the style of your writing and you portray these two beautifully!

Yay for shirtless!Ron! I remember you mentioning that he might make an appearance... *wink*.

Can't wait for the next installment! (I'm totally fangirling you, BTW)

*hugs*

*wishes for a George/Luna icon*

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lauryne78 June 6 2008, 15:29:59 UTC
Thank you *SO* much!! I'm really glad you liked it....as I've mentioned before, it's always a special thrill when someone whose work I really admire likes my stuff, so....

Mm, one really can't get enough of shirtless!Ron, can one?

The Hogsmeade weekend is definitely up next, and all I can say is it features jealous!George.... ;) Should be up sometime next week....

*hugs back*

I recommend Purely_Distel at Creative Cherry here on lj for icons (G/L or otherwise)...it's where I get all of mine!!

Best,
-Lauryne78

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infinity anonymous June 2 2008, 13:12:23 UTC
What a wonderful ficlet! I really like Luna and George as a couple. I hope you continue and go through all the promps. Why don't you publish them ( all or a few) on CM - where I found it via the CM forum - or on any other ff site, so that more people would read it? Good job!

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Re: infinity lauryne78 June 6 2008, 15:33:06 UTC
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I love them as a couple (obviously), and just think they're incredibly fun together. I *do* plan on finishing the prompt claim, so there should be 13 ficlets by the end.

Thanks for the suggestion about CM - I have 3 fics (all R/Hr) up over there, and I've got a multi-chapter George/Luna that's going through the pre-beta process in hopes of getting it posted there as well...these ficlets at the moment are all cross-posted to the rarepair_shorts and georgeluna comms here on lj, as well as linked to the CM forums.

Best,
-Lauryne78

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dransinha77 June 2 2008, 13:16:54 UTC
Oh, I just loved this one too!
I loved the way George is missing her, I loved the brotherly talk, and I would love to read about that Hogsmeade visit...
Wonderful fic! :)

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lauryne78 June 6 2008, 15:34:52 UTC
Thank you so much for your continued support!!

I thought, what's better than Weasley boys and cake? And I could only answer "nothing!!"

I'm glad you enjoyed!!

Hogsmeade up next!!

Best,
-Lauryne78

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quietmuggle June 2 2008, 14:31:04 UTC
I absolutely love George/Luna and your writing is lovely. Thank you for sharing! I'm definitely looking forward to the next bit.

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lauryne78 June 6 2008, 15:35:24 UTC
Thank you so much!! The next one should be up sometime next week...
Best,
-Lauryne78

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psyche29 June 2 2008, 17:04:09 UTC
Beautiful, as were the first two. I love Ron and George talking so freely with each other, and being in perfect accord. Beautifully done, looking forward to more.

Thanks for sharing!!

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lauryne78 June 6 2008, 15:37:44 UTC
I'm really glad you enjoyed it!!

I kind of think that they've both changed a lot over the war, and because of that they'd be able to be more open with each other...and since they're both in the same boat (i.e. missing their girls) I think they *would* be in sync.

Next one should be up soon...
Best,
-Lauryne78

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