peter piper picked a peck of pickled peppers.

Feb 26, 2009 01:03

From a sentence in my thesis which I am currently writing:

...which appears to be founded in the focus on the evocation of emotion which is evident...

Dear Brain,

Always avoid alliteration anon.

No love,
Me

Also, that is some seriously terrible prose. It might be time for bed.

stress, grad school, pagecountdown

Leave a comment

Comments 4

(The comment has been removed)

lauzeta February 28 2009, 00:35:32 UTC
In fact, I find that I'm just starting to get cranked up about the time my prose transitions to awful.

Wait, what?

Reply

(The comment has been removed)

lauzeta March 2 2009, 05:39:29 UTC
Oh, transitions is a verb in that sentence! That makes so much more sense.

I find my prose gets better when I get more invested. When I'm not in the mood, it's just plain all bad.

Reply


brunisols February 28 2009, 17:47:09 UTC
Wait, what were you thinking was wrong with alliteration? What would be more wonderful?

Reply

lauzeta March 2 2009, 05:39:40 UTC
Hush, you. :P

Reply


Leave a comment

Up