Hiding Behind White Shadows...Chapter One.

[lavender_sky1]

I'm finally posting my first chapter. I changed the title from White Shadows to Hiding Behind White Shadows. Hope you enjoy! Chapter under cut. ;) I hope everyone had a nice Memorial Day!

Chapter 1

Always quick to follow
The boys are too refined
Won't matter tomorrow
Oh to be in his mind

And if the timing is right
To sneak off into the night
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Comments

[fairy_glamour]

Very, very good! Keep writing!! :)

The only suggestion I would have is to have Ithica walk to Starbucks because I'm thinking in London if it's in the city they won't have a lot of drivers and parking lots (Actually, they call them carparks, hehe) :)

Good job, post more!

[lavender_sky1]

Thank you, Heidi!
That thought never crossed me. :) You see, I like showing my writing to others. They can help me improve.

[fairy_glamour]

No problem, it's best to have others read it because you never know what they might catch, you know? :)

[lavender_sky1]

Oh, most definitely!
Are you going to Nonna's on Friday?

[pure_chaos7]

wow. this is really really good! you definetly need to keep writing!!

[lavender_sky1]

Aw, thank you! That means a lot to me. *hugs* I'm going to continue writing it, but my mind keeps coming up with new and new story ideas! :D It's hard for me, but I'll try to have chapter 2 up soon.
I have some other works of fiction that I'll post soon!