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luvenck May 6 2010, 04:18:35 UTC
WOW! My heart goes out to both Ennis and Jack. Ennis is so young, and inexperienced in life , and poor Jack. Just an old soul, living within a young body. I loved this line. It sums up both of them.....

"Loving you is the only thing that brought me this far."

I am so into this story. I am really liking it. Thanks for sharing,

Love, Cat xoxo

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lavender_snow May 9 2010, 19:23:31 UTC
Hello, Cat. Wow, so glad you are enjoying this twisted tale. These guys definitely need each other...Thanks for commenting, friend.
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eandj May 6 2010, 05:44:40 UTC
Ennis is so fixated on Jack it scares me. JAck's right he has to concentrate on getting himself well, he has to live his own life.
Oh my - I can see many bumps in the road ahead of them.
Paula

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lavender_snow May 9 2010, 19:25:54 UTC
Yup, Ennis is fixated...Addicts typically exchange one addiction for another...keep in mind Jack's an addict too. Things are going to get a little "Twisted", hope you'll continue to enjoy the ride. Thanks so much for commenting.
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aileenfan May 6 2010, 06:30:46 UTC
Oh my, what a chapter. I really feel for the boys, Ennis is young and lost, Jack is older but lost as well.

I hope they'll be able to help each other and give each other strength.

Wonderful, wonderful chapter:)

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lavender_snow May 9 2010, 19:27:29 UTC
Aw, why thank you so very much. I'm really glad you are enjoying the story. Things start to get a little strange, but hey, it goes along with the title I guess :) Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
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roby100 May 6 2010, 07:24:31 UTC
WOW, such a beautiful chapter! I loved it, I really loved it. The story is wonderful and every chapter is perfect.

**"Only me, Ennis. Only want you comin for me,"**
This is what Ennis, and me, wanted to hear! Can't imagine how happy Ennis was to hear these words finally.

**“Not now, Ennis…not now...," **
Such a promise!! Great hint to the OS, very well done.

**I’m not going to let anything happen to you, I promise.”**
I'm glad to hear this; Ennis is alone outside and he needs love, he needs Jack. Of course he has to learn how to face life by himself but knowing that he has an angel is so helpful!

Jack's birthday present is so sweet, it's perfect for Ennis. The poem is just beautiful and these lines made me melt:
**Unselfishly I give myself to you
Never with hesitation**

Thanks so much for the fast update; it's so good to be addicted to this beautiful story.

A big hug
Roby

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lavender_snow May 9 2010, 19:28:37 UTC
Oh, Roby, your comments always make me smile :) I'm so glad you are enjoying this twisted ride so far. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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lavender_snow May 9 2010, 19:29:36 UTC
These lyrics are beyond perfect, Loreen. I'm so glad this chapter moved you. Thank you, thank you for commenting.
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