Twisted Hearts

[lavender_snow]

Title: Twisted Hearts
Rating: R
Genre: au!au
Disclaimer: Ennis and Jack belong to Annie Proulx. No disrespect intended.
Summary: Under cut

Comments

[roby100]

Of course the chapter is sad but it's very well written and I loved it in spite of the sadness. I loved that Jack wanted Ennis with him in the worst moment of his life and I'm sure he will let Ennis know what happened in that hospital room. I loved Ennis trying to make body contact so that Jack feels he is not alone.

I loved these lines **I held him in my arms and rocked and kissed and hushed until he was all cried out.**
It's exactly what Jack did for Ennis during his first days in the rehab.Touching and lovely, it gave me so many emotions.

Thanks for the chapter. Sad but full of love.

A big hug
Roby

[luvenck]

**DEEP Breath--slowly exhaling

[bbmbeliever]

different from the problem i thought it would be. great chapter though.

[cosmok44]

Boy these guys are going through alot of hard things really quickly. One thing after another is happening. I Hope the future holds some happiness for them too. I am glad that they have & love each other. Hope Jack tells Ennis what happened when he saw his parents.

[ifyoucantfixit2]

Dear God: It is so great to have someone to comfort you
in your hour of need. It does help. Ennis is truly starting to learn what life is really all about. He can
see that it is not all bad, or all good. It is some of one and some of the other. The best part of having someone to share your life with, is to have them there, for for both of those times. They can sare the joy, and the pain. It makes them both more a part of you. They share the bad, thus the pain. They share the joy, making it more joyful for both of you. That is how life becomes a bittersweet mixture of both the elements that you need to survive, and live. Thanks for a very insiteful and endearing chapter. It didn't need to be long. It said a great deal. janice