Comments | lavitanuova: Fresh Start (Ben/Claudia, PG)

lavitanuova

Fresh Start (Ben/Claudia, PG)

Oct 28, 2011 17:46

Fresh Start
Ben/Claudia
Rated PG

For jrmstoughchick for the farscape_land Trick or Treat challenge!

( My marriage is over. )

Comments 15

jrmstoughchick October 28 2011, 22:54:07 UTC

Eeeee! I love it!

I love that Claudia told him "no" at the beginning. That's REAL.
I love that he called her again.
I love that she said yes the second time.

I love themmmmm <33333333333 Thank you!!!!!

dizzydame October 30 2011, 04:51:49 UTC

YAY, I'm glad you like it!! :D

dargai October 28 2011, 22:59:49 UTC

This is awesome! I like that they're both confused and that Claudia doesn't agree right away.

dizzydame October 30 2011, 04:52:06 UTC

I'm so glad you like it. :D Thanks for commenting!

marieyotz October 28 2011, 23:02:49 UTC

Love it, Diz! Ends with a moment full of promise!

dizzydame October 30 2011, 04:52:21 UTC

Of course - I think I'm allergic to unhappy endings. :D

virkatjol October 28 2011, 23:05:43 UTC

I love that you churned this thing out so fast!!!! OMG SO GOOD!! It's perfect. I adore her wanting to wait. It's like it's not even real so she wants to make sure. I love it. Although I still call shenanigans on cheating on Claudia. ;)

dizzydame October 30 2011, 04:53:29 UTC

I love that you churned this thing out so fast!!!!

I pride myself on my freakish writing speed.

Also, glad you liked it. :)

karen_b October 28 2011, 23:10:23 UTC

Very nice and very real.

Definitely ends on the promise of what's to come. :)

dizzydame October 30 2011, 04:53:44 UTC

Thanks!!