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20thcenturyvole November 15 2012, 00:46:45 UTC
This is so awesome, from beginning to end. The characterisation is just lovely. :D

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lavvyan November 17 2012, 17:05:18 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

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kisahawklin November 18 2012, 01:40:36 UTC
You already know how much I love this. And I recced it, too. Natasha will always be my favorite, I love how you write her, but the scene with JARVIS breaks my heart every time. Love it, and you. <3

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lavvyan November 20 2012, 19:01:52 UTC
Thank you, thank you, thank you! This story would suck so much without you! *squishes*

<333

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girlygothic November 18 2012, 07:07:12 UTC
This is so completely awesome! I loved Clint's mac-n-cheese spittake when he finally met Phil. I loved the little glimpses of Agent Li. I loved how Clint and Nat interacted. I hated when Phil "died". You tore my heart out when Clint had Jarvis imitate Phil's voice. And OMG, the donuts! (Which is extra weird/funny/touching, as just earlier tonight I was watching A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to Thor's Hammer again.)

But mostly, I love how you wove it in and around the canon plotlines. It just feels so true.

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lavvyan November 20 2012, 19:02:48 UTC
Thank you very much! This story was hard to write in a variety of ways, so I'm thrilled you like it.

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oxoniensis November 26 2012, 12:36:10 UTC
I love the way you wove the story between the canon moments we're familiar with, and still managed to make it feel completely fresh and new and exciting.

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lavvyan November 27 2012, 17:18:44 UTC
Thank you very much!

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psyche29 November 27 2012, 19:05:46 UTC
Here via rec from kisahawklin. I just spent the better part of my lunch hour reading this and alternating between laughing and bawling and laughing again. This was wonderful, thank you so much for writing and sharing it!

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lavvyan December 10 2012, 15:36:50 UTC
Thank you very much for taking the time to comment! I appreciate it. :)

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