LJ Idol Week 8

[lawchicky]

Harry stood in the doorway, a giant duffel bag hanging from his left shoulder. He should have already been on the road, but it was hard to leave. It was hard to do anything at all at this point. He walked back into the house, dropping his bag next to the hall closet, and laid down on the hardwood floor in the dining room. The house looked so

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

Moving out of a beloved home is one of the hardest things to do. You conveyed this well.

[kittenboo]

Moving from somewhere important is so difficult. Well done.

[karmasoup]

You really captured the sentiment of this type of major change.

[roina_arwen]

I feel ya. Changes are hard.

[tonithegreat]

Ah, poor guy. I always felt like the guy I bought my house from felt this way about it. He grew up in the house, which his parents bought new and his parents grew old there. He and his wife and kids lived there for some time too, and emotions were high at the closing.